Re: Adviser to the Throne
Will you fix up? Theres some places that are out of sorts and i cant understand, but i like this peice.
Re: Adviser to the Throne
Terrible. Poor flow, you have no idea of what you're talking about clearly and are just rambling. At best basic as hell, but you deserve to be dunked in battery acid for this terrible open mic. Worst of the month.
Re: Adviser to the Throne
This was obviously typed up quickly, i mean sweet virgin Mary Knowp, you misspelled "so". There was a few instances a word was missing. despite shit like that, This was awesome. I loved the concept, the duality of man type deal it was great. aside from the obviously rushed areas the flow was good, and your choice of words played well into your concept. I really liked your choice of rhyming words at the end, using compound rhymes as oppose to simple ones.
I wish this was longer and more polishd but i liked it.
peep Steed Heart bro
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ce-Steed-Heart
Re: Adviser to the Throne
I got it...this had to be a keystyle, the message was clear and the basics were covered. Yeah the brevity kills this but for as short as it is you still brought out some contrast in making your point. I like the saint line, funny cause that was close to someone said on Capital Hill. But yeah, for what it is, it's a good drop.
Re: Adviser to the Throne
thanks for the feed. and you're both right. it was keystyle. i should have put a little more into it tho.