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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 line minimum
16 line maximum (unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
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RYNO
^^^Wha?Quote:
I got your mom crying she knew from the start I wasnt fuckin with you
ill spread your organs all over the walls then dry her eyes with your muscle tissue
U’ve got the punchlines of a newb homie where could u rank?
Those cheap shots r so horrible, Conor Mcgregor looks like a saint
Don’t front like u clap guns son, we know that u can’t hurt me
U got a lot of rounds w. no bodies, ur as lame as the txt tourney
Been MIA for awhile but this time u’ll go missing from slugs
No matter where ya ‘bee skep’, I’ll leave ur body covered in bugs
He’s queer to the bone, that faggot shit should put em to shame
He loved DixonButts waaaay before Outwrite requested the name
I could wet em up, but the knife’ll cut through this pussy
If the blades whirl, pools of his blood streamin like the jacuzzis
SKEPTO
Not sure if you want them sent to you or what...Either way fuck it lol you got em now.
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your life is at steak ill punch you in the rib, I see you looking for beef faggot
Eager to stand there and take punches ever since you found out they call ambulances meat wagons
Rapping is not in your genes neither are girls still looking for your first fucking
your whole styles old you couldnt be dazzling to a girl..she knows rynstones are worth nothing
What the fuck happened in the tourney? out in round one did something trouble you
or did you find out wux was broke? because this philanthropist just gave him the W
I dont have many personals for you to be honest. so I sat here to debate if id show
you would ventura loss because everything ryno drops is stretching especially the ace in his hole
This man wants to be a legend so bad he blue, king and $pit not that big of mystery
The evidence was all over the floor and if you ask him he planned to go down in His Story
Rounds with no bodies
Bee skep ....bit of a reach though
Vs
Some pretty bad wording and concepts.....out to was terrible...IMO ....
V- ryno
Hard call...
Skepto is beyond tight in the middle but the rhyme schemes in the beginning and end were lost.
Ryno had the more clever disses - hysterical about outwrite and dixonbuts
BOTH of you seem more like vocals then texties which is why so much is lost. I believe the quality of both would've been stronger if we heard them
V/ Skepto for: (I don't know how to quote)
What the fuck happened in the tourney? out in round one did something trouble you
or did you find out wux was broke? because this philanthropist just gave him the W
I dont have many personals for you to be honest. so I sat here to debate if id show
@Ryno
This verse was a little light from you, rhyme schemes was basic as hell, could use more inners and multies isntead of the obvious approach, I liked the dixinbut bar but its so corny it gets a laugh out of me because he made the request to me.
U’ve got the punchlines of a newb homie where could u rank?
Those cheap shots r so horrible, Conor Mcgregor looks like a saint
He’s queer to the bone, that faggot shit should put em to shame
He loved DixonButts waaaay before Outwrite requested the name
Skep
holy moley some of these bars are stretched beyond heaven, you even had a bar about him stretching which was an irony but I know you didn't mean that, i like the lost in round 1 bar the best, overall I have rhyno having a bar over you, your site refernce game is on point tho, you should do more bars like that, you also had the same rhyming problem as rhyno, step out side of the dr suess rhymes poeple!
hat the fuck happened in the tourney? out in round one did something trouble you
or did you find out wux was broke? because this philanthropist just gave him the W
v = rhyno
Don’t front like u clap guns son, we know that u can’t hurt me
U got a lot of rounds w. no bodies, ur as lame as the txt tourney
He’s queer to the bone, that faggot shit should put em to shame
He loved DixonButts waaaay before Outwrite requested the name
vs
What the fuck happened in the tourney? out in round one did something trouble you
or did you find out wux was broke? because this philanthropist just gave him the W
I dont have many personals for you to be honest. so I sat here to debate if id show
you would ventura loss because everything ryno drops is stretching especially the ace in his hole
So yea ive got both battlers with 4of10 lines that hit here and what it came down to was creativity and entertainment.. ifelt like Ryno came a bit flat versus what seemed to be a more personal polished verse from Skepto. Ryno had the delivery and structure but Skepto had the sting and directness
V/Skepto
I feel like Skepto was a lil over the place with a weakish verse while Ryno had a couple hard hitters which was enough to get the job done. V/ RynoQuote:
Originally Posted by King
Vote Ryno.Quote:
Originally Posted by King
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