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@Smog
@Art.
What’s good bro.
Whattup .. 10?Quote:
Originally Posted by Smog
At least 12. Cool?
That’s coolQuote:
Originally Posted by Smog
Smog is good to go. He sent 12 in.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Soule
a buddhist lol why do u battle at all, problems? i adapt to and solveQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
if u look at what this monkeys, it just proves that he hasnt evolved
I've battled and cooked vets, you've been here long & look stressed
So we just call you a veteran, & hope u follow in Dia's cousins footsteps
Amen posted your side chick and , well lets hope shes just a friend
she'd make everyone at that truck stop.. and try to run her over again
& ur not confident, factually its rough, 4 a shy bitch im sure battling is tough
I'd keep mentioning your insecurity, but bein a mall cop is embarrassing enough
not to mention, you spend too much time stoned, just pay attention
1 punch'll have u lookin @ a Doctor Strange, & send ur soul to a different dimension
PMing mods verses ? damn, never , fuck that method man ur feelin mad pressure
Shit you got me reading so many Wu Verses, you'd think smog was a clan member
12... hey Fuck u Smog!
@Wuxia open it up bruh
Shorty said u fuck like a jack rabbit n bust quick, said this lame ain’t in shape
I mean s’cool to hit it Fast Start.. but NOT if u can’t Maintain The Pace
same in this rap shit, u get off quick then slooow down
No1 cares how tuff the top is, if the bottoms Ass, PUSSY… n all that makes up a Hoe round
Computer geek, in my time here u haven’t amazed cuz WTF did u achieve
Seen years of dope shit I’m too old to surprise.. but u in champ match is shockingly new to me.
Ur np on Mira was corny too, in fact every np u’ve jotted dude
The way you go after handles looks stupid..n why u get beat anytime someone crosses u
Ur thought process is gay, u hope men’ll lift u when u fold under pressure
S’why all u see is Art Surrounded by Wood.. it’s the mind Frame that Holds Him Together
N I appreciate u keepin the chat poppin, u n Lay give this site activity
For real bro, ur why man caves were created.. to avoid rooms where cryin Bitches be.
Art- fire verse dude… shit flowed well and was packed full of good shit… monkey was ok and I wasn’t really feeling the closer but everything in the middle was flames… that veteran line was bonkers lmao… I liked it all in between… I haven’t read smog yet but this gonna be tough to beat… one of the better verses I read on here in awhile.. wording was perfect
Smog- cool verse… I liked handles, wood, mancave.. nothing to really hate on… I just think after reading arts verse the shit in urs didn’t live up… I kinda wish I would of read yours first cuz then I would of appreciated more but after reading what I believe to be a dope verse urs kinda came up sup par.. no hate tho… ur verse would of been a problem had it not went against that verse
Vote art
a buddhist lol why do u battle at all, problems? i adapt to and solve
if u look at what this monkeys, it just proves that he hasnt evolved
solid personal
I've battled and cooked vets, you've been here long & look stressed
So we just call you a veteran, & hope u follow in Dia's cousins footsteps
harsh, diggin it
Amen posted your side chick and , well lets hope shes just a friend
she'd make everyone at that truck stop.. and try to run her over again
lol funny fake personal, half pts
& ur not confident, factually its rough, 4 a shy bitch im sure battling is tough
I'd keep mentioning your insecurity, but bein a mall cop is embarrassing enough
this woulda worked better on soule, but still, funny. half pts for the fake personal
not to mention, you spend too much time stoned, just pay attention
1 punch'll have u lookin @ a Doctor Strange, & send ur soul to a different dimension
cool
PMing mods verses ? damn, never , fuck that method man ur feelin mad pressure
Shit you got me reading so many Wu Verses, you'd think smog was a clan member
ok decent jab
vs
Shorty said u fuck like a jack rabbit n bust quick, said this lame ain’t in shape
I mean s’cool to hit it Fast Start.. but NOT if u can’t Maintain The Pace
the fast art / fast start worked phonetically, but it wasnt a significant enough wp to be hard hitting. jab here
same in this rap shit, u get off quick then slooow down
No1 cares how tuff the top is, if the bottoms Ass, PUSSY… n all that makes up a Hoe round
not feeling this one
Computer geek, in my time here u haven’t amazed cuz WTF did u achieve
Seen years of dope shit I’m too old to surprise.. but u in champ match is shockingly new to me.
cool
Ur np on Mira was corny too, in fact every np u’ve jotted dude
The way you go after handles looks stupid..n why u get beat anytime someone crosses u
dont get it
Ur thought process is gay, u hope men’ll lift u when u fold under pressure
S’why all u see is Art Surrounded by Wood.. it’s the mind Frame that Holds Him Together
lol ok
N I appreciate u keepin the chat poppin, u n Lay give this site activity
For real bro, ur why man caves were created.. to avoid rooms where cryin Bitches be.
kinda statementish
I got Art. here comfortably. Smog did his thing but Art was too much for him this time around. Good shit gents
v/ Art.
a buddhist lol why do u battle at all, problems? i adapt to and solve
if u look at what this monkeys, it just proves that he hasnt evolved
good lol
I've battled and cooked vets, you've been here long & look stressed
So we just call you a veteran, & hope u follow in Dia's cousins footsteps
ehhh
Amen posted your side chick and , well lets hope shes just a friend
she'd make everyone at that truck stop.. and try to run her over again
lmao
& ur not confident, factually its rough, 4 a shy bitch im sure battling is tough
I'd keep mentioning your insecurity, but bein a mall cop is embarrassing enough
okay
not to mention, you spend too much time stoned, just pay attention
1 punch'll have u lookin @ a Doctor Strange, & send ur soul to a different dimension
this is okay too not hard hitting felt a bit forced
PMing mods verses ? damn, never , fuck that method man ur feelin mad pressure
Shit you got me reading so many Wu Verses, you'd think smog was a clan member
not feeling this one
vs
Shorty said u fuck like a jack rabbit n bust quick, said this lame ain’t in shape
I mean s’cool to hit it Fast Start.. but NOT if u can’t Maintain The Pace
mm not feeling this one
same in this rap shit, u get off quick then slooow down
No1 cares how tuff the top is, if the bottoms Ass, PUSSY… n all that makes up a Hoe round
too wordy for me and not sure whats going on here
Computer geek, in my time here u haven’t amazed cuz WTF did u achieve
Seen years of dope shit I’m too old to surprise.. but u in champ match is shockingly new to me.
ok but statementish
Ur np on Mira was corny too, in fact every np u’ve jotted dude
The way you go after handles looks stupid..n why u get beat anytime someone crosses u
cool I like this one
Ur thought process is gay, u hope men’ll lift u when u fold under pressure
S’why all u see is Art Surrounded by Wood.. it’s the mind Frame that Holds Him Together
lol
N I appreciate u keepin the chat poppin, u n Lay give this site activity
For real bro, ur why man caves were created.. to avoid rooms where cryin Bitches be.
mild
enjoyable read here, Art was consistent all around with jabs, although had some misses with the dia line, and the closer was a bit mild. Smog kicked off pretty bad imo but picked up strength at the end. I got Art with a more consistent verse and better misses
v/art
a buddhist lol why do u battle at all, problems? i adapt to and solve
if u look at what this monkeys, it just proves that he hasnt evolved
Not bad okay
I've battled and cooked vets, you've been here long & look stressed
So we just call you a veteran, & hope u follow in Dia's cousins footsteps
Way better than my dia bar lol
Amen posted your side chick and , well lets hope shes just a friend
she'd make everyone at that truck stop.. and try to run her over again
This was basic but kinda funny
& ur not confident, factually its rough, 4 a shy bitch im sure battling is tough
I'd keep mentioning your insecurity, but bein a mall cop is embarrassing enough
Lmfao
not to mention, you spend too much time stoned, just pay attention
1 punch'll have u lookin @ a Doctor Strange, & send ur soul to a different dimension
Nice
PMing mods verses ? damn, never , fuck that method man ur feelin mad pressure
Shit you got me reading so many Wu Verses, you'd think smog was a clan member
Nah
vs
Shorty said u fuck like a jack rabbit n bust quick, said this lame ain’t in shape
I mean s’cool to hit it Fast Start.. but NOT if u can’t Maintain The Pace
Decent
same in this rap shit, u get off quick then slooow down
No1 cares how tuff the top is, if the bottoms Ass, PUSSY… n all that makes up a Hoe round
Nah bro
Computer geek, in my time here u haven’t amazed cuz WTF did u achieve
Seen years of dope shit I’m too old to surprise.. but u in champ match is shockingly new to me.
No
Ur np on Mira was corny too, in fact every np u’ve jotted dude
The way you go after handles looks stupid..n why u get beat anytime someone crosses u
This was okay
Ur thought process is gay, u hope men’ll lift u when u fold under pressure
S’why all u see is Art Surrounded by Wood.. it’s the mind Frame that Holds Him Together
Not bad. Good attempt
N I appreciate u keepin the chat poppin, u n Lay give this site activity
For real bro, ur why man caves were created.. to avoid rooms where cryin Bitches be.
Naww
Overall I thought this was pretty one sided honestly. I’ve read a lot better from smog. I really didn’t like a lot of the concepts he was coming up with. Art’s verse was pretty fire throughout besides his closer
v/ Art
a buddhist lol why do u battle at all, problems? i adapt to and solve
if u look at what this monkeys, it just proves that he hasnt evolved
like monk keys
I've battled and cooked vets, you've been here long & look stressed
So we just call you a veteran, & hope u follow in Dia's cousins footsteps
harsh
Amen posted your side chick and , well lets hope shes just a friend
she'd make everyone at that truck stop.. and try to run her over again
nice
& ur not confident, factually its rough, 4 a shy bitch im sure battling is tough
I'd keep mentioning your insecurity, but bein a mall cop is embarrassing enough
hey! You STFU. It's an honest living, Marvin.
not to mention, you spend too much time stoned, just pay attention
1 punch'll have u lookin @ a Doctor Strange, & send ur soul to a different dimension
nice
PMing mods verses ? damn, never , fuck that method man ur feelin mad pressure
Shit you got me reading so many Wu Verses, you'd think smog was a clan member
bar of the verse
Art, very consistent verse here. I dig it. don't think there's a single bar that didn't land.
Vs
Shorty said u fuck like a jack rabbit n bust quick, said this lame ain’t in shape
I mean s’cool to hit it Fast Start.. but NOT if u can’t Maintain The Pace
meh
same in this rap shit, u get off quick then slooow down
No1 cares how tuff the top is, if the bottoms Ass, PUSSY… n all that makes up a Hoe round
too wordy
Computer geek, in my time here u haven’t amazed cuz WTF did u achieve
Seen years of dope shit I’m too old to surprise.. but u in champ match is shockingly new to me.
he's been champ before so seems like a broken personal
Ur np on Mira was corny too, in fact every np u’ve jotted dude
The way you go after handles looks stupid..n why u get beat anytime someone crosses u
basketball reference, for those who missed it
Ur thought process is gay, u hope men’ll lift u when u fold under pressure
S’why all u see is Art Surrounded by Wood.. it’s the mind Frame that Holds Him Together
a little wordy but cool concept
N I appreciate u keepin the chat poppin, u n Lay give this site activity
For real bro, ur why man caves were created.. to avoid rooms where cryin Bitches be.
lol
Smog, you started off a bit soft but it got heavier towards the end. I'd clean up the wording some.
Okay battle overall but pretty one sided IMHO. Vote art.
5-0 Art wins