Lay Ya Hammer (ft. Hit n Run)

Named after the Wu Tang track of the same name. Enjoy:



Lay Ya Hammer

Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
Lay ya hammer (Lay ya hammer)
Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
They want the drama? Bring it to 'em! Fuck 'em!

Messiah Kaeto
I've got an Ego but I'm old school, I still rock cassettes
What's not to get? I've never said "I'm not the best"
Stop the press ~ Lets not get stressed, I'll turn water to wine
Sort of Divine? Far from it star, I'm the Lord of Sublime
I'm of course in my prime, some say I'm coursing through time
Or that I'm coarse in my rhymes, the balls in my court sometimes
Others reckon I'm forcing my shine, .. I fuckin' bluntly dispute this
Like Ian Huntley with 2 kids, .. These cunts must be stupid!!

Johnny 6-feet
Is it raw now?... I'm laying it down
Hear us roar now! My lyrics paving the ground
A wave of new sound crashing on ears of imbiciles
Leaving bloodstains and fingerprints on your window sills
No time to sit and chill, let's get it hitting and running
Sinning and crushing, clothesline, pinning and pushing
This is the rebirth from deep earth, the full reverse
Wanna a seat in the hall son? Better ask me first!

Ak'Sent
to harsh deep as feelings...
Tight as a glove, deep as a cove,
.........what chu think? Love is Love,
Ak' sent to gritty, to Grime Now is my time,
bars submerged to all time high..
unreliable debate-able spits to grime,
you admire me when i retire,
spit more then Lava more like Hell's fire

Pykosis
im signin some king shit, on the eve of impeachment
like the last dude that messed with me hasnt been seen since
u gota problem?, its well known im highly reckless
& like his mail, dude you should of addressed it
yeah i hit the trees & smoke weed like a hippy
but even greenpeace couldnt keep this whale of a bitch slipping.
im a staunch supporter of the U.N and foreign order
pffft i couldnt keep it in, like Mexicans that cross the border
my bells ring from Cincinnati 2 Alabama
so fuck a gun, i dont need a reason to lay my hammer.

Djb
fuck a hammer, i'm an mc with a gavel in my palm
the judge, jury, an executioner unravelin the calm
a killer son, like the sudan militia when i bring heat
it's like i'm a burger king, the way i broil the beef
this oil is cheap, try buying dasani by the gallon
the bitchin about things more funny then jim fallon
you getting scared cuz my verse sound intimate now
but, i only go postal when my internet down.......bitch!

Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
Lay ya hammer (Lay ya hammer)
Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
They want the drama? Bring it to 'em! Fuck 'em!
Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
Lay ya hammer (Lay ya hammer)
Lay ya hammer kid (lay ya hammer kid)
They want the drama? Bring it to 'em! Fuck 'em!


Hit n Run byatches :coolio:




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Messiah Kaeto had the best part of this IMO... It was rockin right off the top. It didn't lose much intensity when Jonny went on his verse, but I think Ak'sent didn't really capture the mood you guys were going for at first... It then began to pick up again with Psykosis, who had some ons and some offs, and the end was a little err... I mean, it was kind of corky, but all the same, maybe too much so, but a funny way to end it I suppose with the postal when the internets down...

I enjoyed this as a whole, I thought certainly it lost a little bit of its gusto as it moved on, though all of you had your bright spots... I just think Messiah's verse, in its entirety, was really entertaining and well worded, and then Jonny's was pretty much the same level of technical skill but maybe not quite as interesting as it had began.

Best part of the verse:

Quote:

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Sort of Divine? Far from it star, I'm the Lord of Sublime
I'm of course in my prime, some say I'm coursing through time
Or that I'm coarse in my rhymes, the balls in my court sometimes
Others reckon I'm forcing my shine, .. I fuckin' bluntly dispute this
Like Ian Huntley with 2 kids, .. These cunts must be stupid!!

---

I loved the Ian huntley with 2 kids rhyme it was dope as fuck... and then this was nice as well.

Quote:

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A wave of new sound crashing on ears of imbiciles
Leaving bloodstains and fingerprints on your window sills
No time to sit and chill, let's get it hitting and running
Sinning and crushing, clothesline, pinning and pushing

---

Nice shit Jonny.

Quote:

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yeah i hit the trees & smoke weed like a hippy
but even greenpeace couldnt keep this whale of a bitch slipping.
im a staunch supporter of the U.N and foreign order
pffft i couldnt keep it in, like Mexicans that cross the border

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Best park of Psykosis ^^

Quote:

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this oil is cheap, try buying dasani by the gallon
the bitchin about things more funny then jim fallon
you getting scared cuz my verse sound intimate now
but, i only go postal when my internet down.......bitch!

---

And that was a pretty funny way to end it, DJb. Nice work fellas. I enjoyed reading it. Peace.

damn tihs was a real Nice peice.
I liked the Lay Ya hamme Line It catchy.
I also felt messiah came the best out of the crew members
he had better rhymeme sheme and flow and it came hard and strong it was really interesting and well worded to a good extent.


I've got an Ego but I'm old school, I still rock cassettes
What's not to get? I've never said "I'm not the best"
Stop the press ~ Lets not get stressed, I'll turn water to wine
Sort of Divine? Far from it star, I'm the Lord of Sublime
I'm of course in my prime, some say I'm coursing through time

I really liked this part it was entertainin and strong on the words
had a nice lil flow to it too

it really shows ya glorification skills and how gtood of an emcee you intend to portay youself.
nonetheless all emcee came reall good and came on point on their disses to whomever. this was a real nice peice and the emotion of the diss was really in thier and some lines were real catchy to.

A wave of new sound crashing on ears of imbiciles
Leaving bloodstains and fingerprints on your window sills

nice line from johnny it was real good flow

Ak' sent to gritty, to Grime Now is my time,
bars submerged to all time high..
unreliable debate-able spits to grime,
you admire me when i retire,
spit more then Lava more like Hell's fire

nenver knew aksent would do a om but it was a real nice start but it was kinda repetitive on the rhyme but it iight'

yeah i hit the trees & smoke weed like a hippy
but even greenpeace couldnt keep this whale of a bitch slipping.
im a staunch supporter of the U.N and foreign order
pffft i couldnt keep it in, like Mexicans that cross the border

Pscko came hard on that line with real creative and dope

this oil is cheap, try buying dasani by the gallon
the bitchin about things more funny then jim fallon
you getting scared cuz my verse sound intimate now
but, i only go postal when my internet down.......bitch!

real quoteable lines here djb came real good and it was nice and the flow was real interesting
so overall this was a real nice peice with a nice touch up too it keep writing

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...my-345440.html << rtf all of you plz its getting mad slept on

bump

`nice work y'all...I enjoyed the read...glad to see hit n run still got it

whoa, thanks for the props in this....lets hope more people read it, c'mon stop ya sleepin..!!!

yo hit n run u got it bro keep it up

well i must say this was one well developed and put together collab. I mean i basically read it like i song the whole way through which was fantastic. Each of you cought my attention and had internals out the ass, some more then others but nontheless still great. The only real problem i had with this collab was like eng said was ak'sents verse. He didnt seem to capture the exact mood yall were going for. I mean i was pumped readint messiah and johnnys then his ak'sents and it was like almost a sad verse not really a great selfglorifying verse as the rest did..now it wasnt a bad verse nor did it kill this collab was more like a bump in the road that barely made yall swerve out of an HOF nom from me..

i really like messiahs verse that best...

Overall this was a great collab and id love to see more..

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=346408

yeah i agree with people saying kaeto's verse was the best... anyway, this was interesting, i enjo reading the kind of prop yourself stuff nowadays, messiahs whole verse was pretty sick through the ian hutnley metaphors was ill, johnny you began your verse well but the opener kind of stutttered but as your verse expanded it began to flow real well.. aksent your verse was really short, and didnt have much rhyme in it, and the ending metaphor was pretty played, id say to strengthen that part... pyskoss u did good as well, your rhymes really flowed well and u had sum nice vocabulary to spice it up, and djb ur opener was my favorite line u started ur verse off quick and sweet and it stayed that way thru-out.. good job to all

hit up my newest: gods plan

Messiah Kaeto
I've got an Ego but I'm old school, I still rock cassettes
What's not to get? I've never said "I'm not the best"
Stop the press ~ Lets not get stressed, I'll turn water to wine
Sort of Divine? Far from it star, I'm the Lord of Sublime
I'm of course in my prime, some say I'm coursing through time
Or that I'm coarse in my rhymes, the balls in my court sometimes
Others reckon I'm forcing my shine, .. I fuckin' bluntly dispute this
Like Ian Huntley with 2 kids, .. These cunts must be stupid!!
------ill shit my dude way to bring the heat in this..Ian Huntley had me rolling over here..sick verse nice way to open this collab

Johnny 6-feet
Is it raw now?... I'm laying it down
Hear us roar now! My lyrics paving the ground
A wave of new sound crashing on ears of imbiciles
Leaving bloodstains and fingerprints on your window sills
No time to sit and chill, let's get it hitting and running
Sinning and crushing, clothesline, pinning and pushing
This is the rebirth from deep earth, the full reverse
Wanna a seat in the hall son? Better ask me first!
----fuego my dude..nice work....the last bar was the standout for me...your swagga was definitely felt..kept the flames going all the way on this...nice drop!!!

Ak'Sent
to harsh deep as feelings...
Tight as a glove, deep as a cove,
.........what chu think? Love is Love,
Ak' sent to gritty, to Grime Now is my time,
bars submerged to all time high..
unreliable debate-able spits to grime,
you admire me when i retire,
spit more then Lava more like Hell's fire
----i felt your verse but honestly it was kind of let the down from the other two verses..dont get me wrong it didnt suck or anything just seemed out of place..as far as the intensity..

Pykosis
im signin some king shit, on the eve of impeachment
like the last dude that messed with me hasnt been seen since
u gota problem?, its well known im highly reckless
& like his mail, dude you should of addressed it
yeah i hit the trees & smoke weed like a hippy
but even greenpeace couldnt keep this whale of a bitch slipping.
im a staunch supporter of the U.N and foreign order
pffft i couldnt keep it in, like Mexicans that cross the border
my bells ring from Cincinnati 2 Alabama
so fuck a gun, i dont need a reason to lay my hammer.
---ok this pick things back up a tad...nice in your face style..really brought the intensity up..did your thing..nice drop

Djb
fuck a hammer, i'm an mc with a gavel in my palm
the judge, jury, an executioner unravelin the calm
a killer son, like the sudan militia when i bring heat
it's like i'm a burger king, the way i broil the beef
this oil is cheap, try buying dasani by the gallon
the bitchin about things more funny then jim fallon
you getting scared cuz my verse sound intimate now
but, i only go postal when my internet down.......bitch!
-----opening bar was nice....the rest was nice as well..the only thing I wasnt feeling to be honest was the BK line..kind of basic..but thats just being extremely picky..over fire!!!

Overall this a sick collab...Hit N Run..I took notice...the only thing could have been different was the order..I would have broken up the first two..one in the begining and the other at the end..but im a newb so that means nada..I guess..keep doing your thing..very nice work over all..

Lovin the responses guys - thanks everyone for this feedback - much appreciated :coolio: