House of Crackers

replied to:
Sand
Liba Dee
D-chillz


Their is a predator running loose in america's 50 states/
blasting his way to da capital, D.C ,wit no time to waste/
he gotta detonate in a point blank range, on top of da stage/
begins to drop da flows like 10feet of snow, killin mr. plow/
with da verbal artillary alternating randomly, pumpin da crowd/
Who be this alien being creating havoc in da white house?/
its da snakeyes fu, and now you know, so go tell someone hoe/
Cuz this is a spit of unexpected shit representing mexico/
the land of the fifth sun, aztec nation comin wit a creation/
top sensation like an american idol, but da bitch is on vacation/
time to step in and show these ignorant people how to get down/
with these funky sounds, smokin everybody out wit an ounce/
keepin da shit alive like dr.frankenstein, creating a monster /
some people may feel this and othas just get wack by a mobster/
yeah, no topic needed to install this thesis, i eat haters like reces/
pieces of shit dat don't peep game, thinkin this flow be lame/
fuckem, they will never learn to understain my methods/
I got all da answers, so fuck yall questions, leave yall guessin/
who was dat magnificent 27 blastin out at capitol hill aggressive/
no, its not your oridanary rapper, or a van damm kidnapper/
its da predator with da eyes of a serpent, fiery burning/
got da house of representatives turning as i start counting/
i be goddam, not a brown or a black man own a seat in this pad/
just a white vote, opinions with no minority hope, so sad/

u went off subject like i do alot dawg so keep your shit in focus and work on structure

This was ok....structure was alright, could be touched up a bit in a few areas though...Vocab was alright, could be up'd though...try working on your multies though, add some to this....flow in this was alright...but overall this was ok....keep at it.

think ya elevating since ya last couple of drops...jus keep working on ya complexity...internals n multis all the way thru....really set a rhyme off....but the way it is its a decent drop...pZ...

Flow: 7
Internals: 0
Multis: 0
Enjoyment: 6.5

..descent..not bad..but it could've been alot better..your flow was alright..and wordplay was there..but..you drifted off a little..