My Rap Book

Replied:
Sand
Ape
Methodz

The cover distorted and faded wit colors
Red paint to keep unwanted others-out
My faint rhymes drains the few who've read-it
Spoken word has said-it, memorized the book
And its bled when i've felt pain, its insane
Cause it seems when im sad, and I write it rains
In the night im sittin zombie-like, honesty-I-write
Never rappin to fake, never rappin hate
Just tryin to catch a break, wit a topical
Hostile, because I keep it in my pocket were'ever I am
The pages filled wit black-inc, never write wack as I think
My next line just fills its self in, never about wealth
Or about what I wish I had, just about my night in stealth
About myself, and its my book of rhymes
Threw thick & thin, the ruff and easier times
The one thing I can turn to and repent my troubles
Flowin to instrumentals, and writin doubles
Instead of merkin, I add my rage to the page
And write the pen out of ink, blink - and a whole page is filled
These are Sacred Scriptures, never hatred-or-fixtures
Just my book of rhymes.....

damn uppin this... someone reply

simple rhyme scheme but effective noentheless

deep word usage in this shit, u seem like ud be good at english an shit.. nice vocab and kind of abstract emotion, ya dig

i liked this drop neway, keep em comin mayne... hit up my thread "when faith grows"

peace out

ight thanks for the reply... upp

Your rap book isn't even worth me wiping my ass with. Ya piece of shit, eat shit. I'll take you out og style. FROM THE BRONX!!!!!!!!

You fucking queerrr
Get outta heerrre
Before you get stabbed in your earrr
Or in the rearrr
You fucking clown
Get outta town
I never liked Jordan and I never will
Because he likes to get fucked by some guy named Bill

FREESTYLE MIKE WILL TAKE YOU ALL ON!!!

The Rapsss

keep ur hate off my nuts bitch... up

I think you needa work on yo rapbook homie fo real............but I would go as fare as sayin I would wipe my ass wit it.

this was aiight a bit short but still aiight..ya Structure and flow Need Work but its not much....Ya Vocab wordplay was worken in this piece Imagery Was Nice.....so all and all nice work man keep elevaten.......Leave feed back on Never take a chance if u can..