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no dr
no hate
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10-15 line
no dr
no hate
ect ]
Ill spit 1st
I know you dont know this Emcee... and let me tell you, you dont wanna know me//
Known as the Devils playa Marquee.... fuck the prist I stole the church Key//
Disimbody'en god... riped thou tha rocks tied up and though'n Off the docks//
Imagine'n your face...... MIA.......on tha back of a Ceral Box//
I'm worse than Pandora's ... burrin nine times worse than menorahs//
punishin you like im Zeus and your tha duaghter Cora//
Ill probly get question'd and be on the News//
for threatin you..... usin lit fues's... Hot flash tattos//
Speekin Trust.. torcherd Yte High as fuck on angel dust//
white pine blister rust "In blades we thrust"... relax its just...//
another way to harass tha nation..... you thought I was going to say assaination//
Ok I said it.. what ya going to do Ive already been to correctional rehabilitation//
aight good luck
only 14 he got 10 years on me/
move out this city belongs 2 me/
only been rappin 4 2 months hes been rappin 4 years/
when im done yte grl gonna b added 2 ur list of fears/
record 7-2 bout 2 b 7-3/
gone die faster than christopher reeves when he hit a tree/
im bout 2 stomp this faggot in 2 the ground/
yte grls here and shes takin the crown/
like the beastie boys u dont belong in the game/
u should do a remix of insane in the membrane/
u rhyme the same my flows unique/
got the whole unerground sayin my shit is sweet/
ur just not worthy enough 2 battle me/
im not the best but even def kids have heard of me/
duce takes this....
every category
not typin it out....
he takes every one
vote - Tha Duce
no hate
laterz
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-Cprogress
yte grl...your rhyme scheme is far too simple and requires elevation. You must also expand on your vocabulary and add sum complex things to your flow. Also, your rhymes were wayy too predicting. I could basically read it word for word. Visit the wackness emergency centre and elevate.
Vote- Tha Duce
tha duce take all elements of this battle
no need to fully explain it like the others above said
soz about that yte gurl
and VOTE: Tha Duce
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-Cprogress
aight Uppin this mother fucker... Holla
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man, duce killed it, fuck reasons... jus' read the verses, the girl had mad played lines like the 1 up on the loss record line, followed by the chris reeves line...
aight uppin again
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Yo Uppin this mother fucker
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Uppin fo real
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ite this goes to duce in every catagory man shit battle duce dawg battle better pll and work on your personals.
girl work on your structure bulk it out bit more aso punches(shit)..............................hit my battle up now in my sig no now now.........thx.....................pz
tha duce--
weak, a few decent punches but not much there. the flow was pretty good tho, good structure.
yte grl--
bad punches, worse than duce. no resposnes to anything he said. bad flow, bad structure. and you outta know that "deaf" and "def" are different things in rap.
vote: tha duce
return the favor....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102139
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101943
yea. duce takes all of these categories. yte's rhyming scheme was kinda wierd cause it, just was. i really didnt like the verse, but it was good. duce spit it hard and good. i hate giving out all categories, but yte got merked.
vote - duce
return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101623 & http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100587
the deuce took this shit easily...yte girl, your verse didn't even have sensible punches in it. deuce had nice punches, flow, multies...etc...
vote-deuce