Keystyle

Shadow is here and I'm back wit a vengence/
Ready to shut down emcees who ready to witness/
This rapper whose in tha best lyrical fitness/
My weight is too heavy don't attempt to lift this/
My mens just post up watchin my battle/
Emcees get paralysed when they get caught in my lasso/
But I ain't no cowboy my words are loud boy/
Deals in my future tryin to be rich now boy/
Still collidin wit haters and phony spectators/
Be humble for tha moment and leave em a wreak later/
My skills evolve daily so theres no end to tha onslaught/
Trapped in tha struggle but still able to make these bombs drop/
Ready to take on any emcee who wants to battle/
My vocab ain't strong but I still dismantle/
Crews and solos artists alike/
No ones safe in my book so who willin to fight/

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it was okay. i thought it was a bit simple, but i think it could be better. need to work on wordplay. keep writing and return the favor on one of my drops.

I thought It was Too Simple..
The bars Were Even Almost Every Time But The Flow WAS off T o Me..


oVER-ALL, tHIS WAS oK..