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If you beat me you can get in Central..no hatin' no bitin' crew votes are allowed..because my crew arent a bunch of assholes that cheat..and they will be judging if they want you in or not..line limit: dont get ridiculus..theres no need to rap a damn essay..drop when you see this..
i cant drop tonite untill around 930 or so note-this is not a checkin i have bball practice so if your cool wit this ill drop as soon as i can aight?
i come sick i spit ill, n im bout to fulfill, everyone wit a thrill
my werdz leave people so old they chill, and thats how they kill
heres my rhyme scheme, the kid is sixteen, my senses are keen
im 13, n fulfillin his dreams, spit so ill leavin fukaz green
like freddy krueger im in ya nightmares, leavin yas scared
so best be prepared, and ya gon lost cauz like a bunny i win by a hare
do dont get impared, im on top of da polls and your wya down there\/(look at the poll im tip he bottom)
my rhymes chill like ski summits, this battles Ls only thing u take from it
i spit fear, softly yet clear, and then into ya brains i make ya ear, drum it
my lines like paintball guns pump it, got ya in the leg numb it,
no metafors yet so quickly i spit, i use multis fast n then hit
like dickriders of chrit, n and1 wannabes to my Lu you will Skip,
break ya ankles so ya trip, not in the game in the battle heres a forfeit,
im almost done this verse ima bout to leave this nigga bitchin,
my lines are so ill your turn invisible i make em dissacpear like magicians
this is the end of my verse then ill me known, like sex on da phone,
you bout to get stoned, n like terell owne ill break ya colla Bone...
for the record..I havent changed my profile..and I dont know where he got I was 16 from..it learly says 15..12/19/88..but oh well..lets proceed
Dixie will merk this kid.....only thing that will be left is his fuckin' spirit/
And yall will think since he's Animated he can Draw Up some Good Lyrics/
But naw, I'm Elevated Far Above You like I was Wilt standin' on a Pair of Stilts/
You'll think we were Living In Scotland.....the way I'll leave This Kid Kilt/
This kid's frail..it's not hard to tell..I'll leave him pale like a glass of milk/
And this time you have Reasons To Cry when I Leave You Spilled/
Constantly Right Clickin' Your Verse is the only way you'll Keep Up With My Paste/
No need for me to compete with this Toon..I'll just use my Pencil To Erase/
Battling me?..I will dent you, didn't you know skill in this battle was essential?/
This kid's from Philly..but he'll still die in Vain cause he cant handle a Pennsyl/
Dix will....easily match you like I'm a Mime while you just Stand Still/
Put you under a landfill my brother..an umbrella couldnt protect you from an anvil/
I was going to explain my verse..but fuck it..if you dont understabd my wordplay and my punches..then mothafucka..dont vote....
i think dixie took it
bugz bunny ur rhymes are kind of corny..........................................
Dixie "kilt" him.... Ah shit...
he fucking ripped on him with tha personals....
he tore this cartoon up....in flow.... structure...
Bugz... elevate kid....work on ya punches.... and ya flow...
part of flow is structure... make ya lines close to even
v/Dixie
v/dixie
bugs was mostly filler...stop talking about yourself and diss your opponent dude..its a battle..you need personals....or atleast some lines that are suppose to put down your opponent...
some of your lines didnt make sense or i just wasnt fillin'em that much..
no hate just honest vote
dixie..you did what you are suppose to do...throw punches that actually connect...had some decent personals...
good wordplay...flow and creativity...good job hear...
pretty onesided but thats the way it goes sometimes..
no hate bugs...just keep battling man
poll vote =dixie
Bugz...
Lay off the multi's...
A few are dope to hear...
But when ya make that the main ingredient in ya verse...
Ya end up slackin on punches and wordplay.
Those are what will win you the majority of your battles.
Mostly the punches out of those two.
Dixie was pretty flawless here.
Mulititudes of personals and wordplay.
Nice sharp punches.
Slightly stretched lines, but not so it'd bother ya flow.
Overall, a clean cut merk.
Footnote: Bugz...you might wanna consider changing your name...
We've all watched the cartoon for years and years...
Personals against you from good slingas are gonna come pretty easy.
If ya name was Godzilla, same thing...
Godzilla's green with envy, cuz I gave his rhyme tha boot...
And you wear that costume well, cept you don't need tha fat suit.
See, could go on for days like that.
Peace
L's breakdown
punches - dixie
personals - dixie
flow - dixie
creativity - dixie
opener - dixie
closer - dixie
structure - BugZ
OVERALL - dixie
kings overview
flow- dixie
structure- dixie
punches- tie
creativity-dixie
metas- ????
personals- dixie
dixie merked um
vote dixie..
could u plz hit dis one up...
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