Quick Keystyle

Freestylin on this page releasing my rage
watchin the pen work like a wand i'm a mage
droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick
people sayin i'm elevating but yet i'm still furious
what am i doing different, i'm a little curious
actually i'm kiddin i really don't give a fuck
my bars and structure i'm slowly startin to constuct
I'm a part of cryptic lyrics and i know you care bitch
when i grab the mic back up cuz i know you fear it
fuck this freestyle it's whack enough as it is
was gonna try another verse but fuck thissss...

i dunn been a while since i dropped a keystyle freestyle whatever ya wanna call it

This was pretty dope.........very short sweet and to the point........pretty good for a key........i liked cause i feel the same way a lot of the time........

droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick<--Nice

Good shit my man........hit my latest Open Mics when you get the chance......theyre in my sig......thanks man appreciate it!

thanks,
uppin

oh the realness i wasn't feelin it.. first its not a freestyle (can't stand herb dat do dat ish) IT WAS TYPED ASS...

but
droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick <---- was nice

Caesar -On3

krem that was tight.
People say im elavated but yet im still furious
what am i doing different, i'm a little curious.

Illist key ive heard in a while
good work, peace

no doubt
uppin for more

definitely nice............especially for being.......a keystyle/freestyle
okay vocab.....good wordplay

you fell offf with sum filler lines though....
words were a little off but you can beat half of rb if that was a battle verse.......

very nice........and considering the type it was......good job
keep it up

i dont have this one up yet but i wrote it.........i am just replying to open mics now

but when it is up plees reply to it......It will be called "Kryogenix Diss"

thanx

This was a good read...simple but a good key...some creative lines...nothing really much to say...keep doin wutcha doin man...peace

Decent piece...I like how you expressed your true feelings...props for that!..and for being a quick keystyle this was a very nice read...peace...~Click~Click~sig

Tha shit was nice, to tha point, I feel your style, you kinda ask questions in your spits, and you also spit your thoughts, which I quite like...I wanna see more of your shit...

one

no doubt
uppin