SUNSHINE *Vrs* KARE-LESS (Will Return the Favor) Droppa Vote damn-it

this battles another Old Battle that was Never Voted on Really.
MyStErY MuRdErA..IS THE only one who Voted, and it was For Me, but it was Before the POLL system...
abywayz...


SUNSHINE’S verse

My THUGMENTALITY is to stomp you cuz I could KARELESS//The bullets comin for ya head so fuck it if your wearin a vest// verbal specimens of phosphatic flows put you to rest// you think its armageddon when the double barrels aimin for ya chest // This niggas lubein(lubricant) it up squeezin tubes like crest// Stickin two thumbs up! Your ass and puttin your fingers to the test// this bitch claims he sucks good dick, but his girlfriend does it the best// (hits blunt) so I suggest you quit before the situation gets ugly// cuz I’ll leave you like a tampax frame all bloody// damn this verse is like my balls cuz I got you sayin, “your nutty buddy!”//man I fucked your rhymes like your girl, cuz both them bitches is slutty//you want me too mold your rhymes for ya? Cuz they like silly puddy// Damn nigga your flows like your ass…… all cruddy// I should make u pay a battle fee to battle me cuz it so sad to see another casualtie// cuz I gradually bitch slap thee pop thee and drop thee// bustin in yo eye like nuts so u cant see//and choppin off half yo brain givin u a lobatomy//


MY verse
-Kid is Justa bitch the way he has to Sit to Pee, cant you See-
-im makin this hoe Bleed Menstrually. Sunshine has No chance-
-Like balareenas he begins to Prance, even if you were a Budist You'd have no-Chants-
-understand. I'll rip off ya right Hand so you Left Hangin-
-Sun starts Prayin. "oh lord I think i just Met Sate-In"-
-kid starts Hatin. Like brittany you only good Job is when you Fake-In-
-I dont even know why im battelin you. Times your body by 10 and id still Deafeat You!-
-Call you Boo cuz your Suckin off ya Whole Crew, then dump you Over Cliffs Like commercials from Moutnain Dew!-
-Your doin ya best But no result like 9-11 Fire-Fighters-
-i burn your fake-ass so bad, Voters juss Post..VOTE=Lighter-

your verse was Simple and STUPID..SLUTTY MUDDY CLUTTY..WTF!.LoL
thats all i need, and you still got murderd...lol
if you dont understand the WORDPLAY, DONT VOTE...newbies..
uppin fa sum votes... :thumbup:

i cant vote yet but...

sunshine- u need to learn to use personals, metaphors would also be nice but lets try and take this one step at a time, im not sayin u didnt use personals, but u need to learn how to use them. wack flow, wack wordplay, not fellin ur verse

-KareLess- not much better flow, but u used some ok personals, and u had better wordplay, i just dont see how hard it is for both of you to make somewhat even lines, but Kareless took this with wordplay and personals

v/kareless

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115879

Punches-Kare
Vocab-Kare nicely done
Flow-Sun
Personals-Kare
Struture-ehhhh a tie i guess
Opener-Sun nice
Closer-ehhh none i didnt like any
Overall-Kare
i like that line about tha period lol @ it

Vote/Kare

return the favor

r u guys on crack????? how come you gave vocabs to kare???? the only word above a grade 3 mentality was menstrually he he fucking rhymed you with you sunshines was ouviously alot better man.... this shit is all messed up

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Originally Posted by Jammin'Jobus

r u guys on crack????? how come you gave vocabs to kare???? the only word above a grade 3 mentality was menstrually he he fucking rhymed you with you sunshines was ouviously alot better man.... this shit is all messed up

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I'm in a Battle With you and your Swaying Votes in my Other Battles.
And Yeah I got More Battles Up Because these are Old BATTLES that
were Never Voted on that should Have Been. There Not Specifically
ACTIVE THREADS, but they Are for Votes. Bitch!.

One More thing. GET OFF MY NUTZ BITCH!. youv'e posted in every thread
iv'e been in since OUR BATTLE. Your wack Face it.
Go to WACKNESS EMERGENCY CENTER FOR HELP. and that's not hating
that's friendly Emcee Advice Hoe!..


UpPiNg For mOrE VoTeS...pZzZzZ

UpPiNg fOr mOrE PoLl vOtEs....
PlEaSe.....
VoTeVoTeVoTeVoTe

Wordplay: K. Nice left hanging line. Not really much from sun that helped in anyway.
Flow: S. Both alright flows, but s just had it.
Meta's: K. K had Nicer stuff in, but both could've done better here.
Multi's: None. Both lacking here really.
Punches: K. Both could've been better, but then when can anything be perfect? K's were nicer in general. Sunshines' 'all cruddy line' made him sound bad and worked against him in the end.

Vote: K.

sturcure:karless
multies:karless
puchlines:none
flow:sun
personal:karless
disses:karless
openin :sunshine
overall:karless
RETURN THE FAVOR IN 1 OF MY LINKS IN MY SIGNATURE PLEASE

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UppInG #3...
pLeAsE dRoPpA VoTe oNtHiS ShIt. POLL iT ToO..
Upping for Fucking Votes damn it

UpPiNg #4.. .. .. ...
Please Drop a fuckin vote if your Peeping this Shit. and POLL it.
VOTEVOTEVOTEVOTEVOTEVOTE.

Drop your link i will return the honest Vote on your battle aswell.

im goona vote4 for sunshine, honestly no hate kareless
sunshines had more content and and better rhymes
like likes his --------I should make u pay a battle fee to battle me cuz it so sad to see another casualtie/ that was pretty good compared to the rest and his closer was also not bad

Kareless---- if you woulda had more multis you couda proly taken this one
but your rhymes were too simple
i liked your mountain dew rhyme though------Call you Boo cuz your Suckin off ya Whole Crew, then dump you Over Cliffs Like commercials from Moutnain Dew!-

your closer was pretty weak though you had a lbetter wordplay but he still gets the vote

but both of you way overused to alreay very played gay shit its come to the point it doesnt mater how good the line is all i see is "plz vote against" but seriously try mixing shit up a biyt

Punches-Kareless
Vocab-Kareless
Flow-Sun
Personals-tie
Struture-tie
Overall-Kareless

vote goes to kare. Just because he simply took about everything in this battle. His punches hit harder and his vocab was decent. Other cats verse was good too, just not as good. Good battle.

PLease return the favor....link is in my siggy, thanks

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Sunshine hit Kareless much harder in a street rap kinda way...

Woulda burned him on the corner.

But in text, it comes off looking herbish, elementary, and weak.
Used up wordplay and metas, shit that's been jotted and posted a 1000 times.

Kare spit a wittier verse, utilized better wordplay...

Some of it I'd seen before, but I remember the time this battle took place...

His shit was up to date then.

So, better wit, wordplay, resulting in better punches.

Kareless

This nugga said "ill return the favor" BAUHAHA Damn,,


ANy ways.. Karless took this prolly.. if i read the battle...

Yeah ok.. He came with better metaphors and harder punchs.. the Right/Left Hangin line was dope.. EXCEPT played, like two years ago..ahem....
The mountain dew line was aiight.. Eh, but fuck it what do i know, im skillless..



The OutCome is Kareless

Era

Kareless, took this wit nice punches

Punches and Personals-Kareless juss came harder than the otha guy in this battle, here

Structure and Flow-Kareless, sunshine, your shit was too bunched together

Vocabulary and Wordplay-Kareless, his shit was juss more complex than Sunshine's verse

Conclusion-Both need elevation, but otha than that good battle

Vote-Kareless

Since I took time on yours and u said you'd return the favour honestly drop a honest vote on my battle, please vote, I took time on yours, now it's your turn

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116536

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