Lol

you a wack m.c.........
wannabe jay-z's but lack the blueprint schmattics-
im noncentz....its automattic....
my dope tracks could retire a heroin addicts.
the carasmattic lyricist slated to be the most hated.......
im only stating what the facts is.
whoever daignosed you ill should be sewed for malpractice.
you faget wanna be's stay on the web like arachnids-
swareing you ill and couldnt even get signed to do adlibs.
100 bars and only 4 spoke close to even worth a qoute-
that aint a verse that a reseeding text note!
am i that ill....shit my freespittens got my writtens paranoid-
wit fake m.c.'s trying to see me only leaving wit poloroids.
i aint saying im the best well actually since we on the subject...
i subject rappers to eddicate-that equal singular death in predicate.
twist dialect- on 99 percent of these rejects-
the only push your tape get is eject.
i show no respect -unless you read this and dont take offence-
and rip you......afterwards you be refered to in obituary past tence.
(OH ------- YEAH I HERD HE WAS TIGHT FOR A SECOND)
but he aint the street reppin nobody herd of a suburban legend.
and i can show you the stairway to heaven in only 2 steps-
1 challenging me and 2 your death in chronological sequence.
its that intence......
my tracks like a premintion of murder cause i kill you in the suspence!
i show you the definition of a real m.c.-
sfater this....
ill sell my cd with a my pic so you can see who you envy.
sorr....the family tree ends here there will never be another m.k.c
so suck my dick thats the closest you can cum to spitten like me.

what i thought stood out in this was the vocab.... nicely placed... even if ya spelling's shit...lol.... there was some nice wordplay in too... but judging by your last few drops, id say you've got what ya might call a HUGE swollen head...lmao...ha ha, another drop on how good you are..... nah j/k..... well written......

Yeah Lately I Noticed I Been Acting Bragadocious But Its Just Fun For Me I Thought I Had Lost My Eadge This Helps Me Get It Back But Also I Must Admit Im Ready To Attack Some Real Subject I Dropped Some Higher Knowledge Tracks But I Attract A Dif Crowd And They Seam So Limited.

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Oh Aight Then My Bust I Will Post 2 More Now

Posted To High Class +my Thoughts

Sick. content was alright... your audio yes?
this would be a good track, not a deep one
but just to sit down and listen a couple of
times.
Your vocabulary was good but ur lines
need uppin in equality some were good but
some just fell off/ are played. i know u
didnt mean this to be deap so its goood.
Peep Cleats .. Independence - mantik aka Dao

^

YOUR SIG IS NICE....

but yeah dunny this ish was madd nice dunny... wordplay was there played nicely vocab most def... deadly dunny... yo ish is nice i've peeped ish you have done before... nice nessl... yep

Caesar - On3

As usual like the way you manage to flow without subscribing to the equal line format. Several examples of nice wordplay within, well used vocab'. Nice piece - even if the hundred bar line did refer to me. Thought:
and i can show you the stairway to heaven in only 2 steps-
1 challenging me and 2 your death in chronological sequence.
its that intence......
was pretty tight.

Thanks Twin As For Keeping Bars Equal I Dont Do That For A Reason I Play A Beat While I Type And Design Lyrics That Fit That Beat Only No Other

For some reason I think of KRS whenever I see your stuff - hit my Lamentations if you get a chance.