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...freepost...
^^Look. I'm Pullin' a You. :thumbup:
anyWay. Damn! your tryna Battle everyOne tonight Huh :laugh:
I'll be Voting Here On this Battle. I'm Looking Forward. I suppose.
MeanWhile.
BLOOP! :evilgrin:
Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148
Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468
Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532
Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900
If voted On Honestly. It would Be Greatly Appreciated. AnyOne?..
Bitch smack yourself...... IM RICK JAMES BITCH...
Check check
Check...and tha time starts now
Cuz I just saw this shit..
I'm a talk to someone dope..& I'll put in some good wordsQuote:
Originally Posted by -KareLess-
You need em'
Reading that freepost hurts worse then reading your verse!
Call'd for some1 wack & OutComes this bitch..scared,dumb
Seeing Out come with dope punches..Now thats a rare one!
Got rejected from Heaven..
Cuz they don't allow lesbians..thats you...so go to hell dyke
Can u say retard?
..This dumb fuck thought my custom title was spelt right!
This faggot supplies a Ill drop everytime..in fact he promises
He should atleast..He gets it from "ghostwriters" annonimous!
So if you ever want to see tha OutCome of this..you'll know..
To go look in tha obitauries..& start ya search under "O"
Explained votes only...good luck hoe
Hurry your ignorant ass up
shit....how long does it take you?
Mine took about 11 minutes...
...herbs these days...sheesh
First he was Tyler Durden now hes well worded
Changin name but a style switch is what you should perfer kid
i turn off this broken fauset so he can flow right
wrong plumbing if they were virgin pipes ya shit wouldnt be tight
You see guy, his vocabulary isnt perfect
its a front when it comes down to it i need ebonics to read verses
fuck it i reflect his wack crusen with mirrors
angel the directionto bounce off and make his wackness disapeer
Well worded comes off more badly said than the rest
like stuttering mutes missing whats said in spelling bees for the def
Look at this herb, the mods hada reset his post count
its like god giving wack another chance with another account
-a quick try-
Man what can i say about your skill thats unsaid
having talents somthing for you like talking dead
imaginary, and frankly psyics dont see it hap-ning
No Rapping skill, Dude just stick to UPS packaging
atleast when i Punch youll be down looking at UPS
Fuck your verse easy like god gave me some sluts
Im sorry if you dont agree, but denial hardly does
asking why your wack is written under just because
iight fav line from well wonder:
Quote:
Reading that freepost hurts worse then reading your verse!
Call'd for some1 wack & OutComes this bitch..scared,dumb
Seeing Out come with dope punches..Now thats a rare one!
Got rejected from Heaven..
IIGHT VERSE
fav line from outcome:[quotw]fuck it i reflect his wack crusen with mirrors
angel the directionto bounce off and make his wackness disapeer
Well worded comes off more badly said than the rest
like stuttering mutes missing whats said in spelling bees for the def
IIGHT [/quote]
breakdown
strucuture:outcome
flow:wonder
multies:wonder
puchlines:outcome
wordplay:outcome
v/outcome
battle was decent...no lines had me really chucklin tho...
v/ - Outcome
why? better punches. Well-Worded...you attempted em...but you need to flip the concepts. Your punches are played and you showed no attempts at flipping them around to creative something creative. I think that if you worked on your verse more...then you could of taken this battle...but you didn't...which is why I crown Outcome as the winner.
If you would like me to further explain my vote...I will do so.
Winner- Well Worded
Well Worded- Ok Verse, YOu Had Some Punches That Hit Hard, And Some That Hit Ok. Your Flow Was There, And Structure Was Nice, YOur Wordplay Was Ok And Vocab Was Lacked, Ok Verse..
Outcome- Your Verses Flow Was Off Untill The End, You Had Some Nice Punches/Personals, And Your Structure Was Pretty Nice, YOu Wordplay Was Ok, And Vocab Wasnt There Either
Pretty Close Battle But Well Worded Wins...Outcome Shoulda Came Harder
Vote- Well Worded
Hit THis UP
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116302
Outcome For Got To Poll^
outcome took this one
he had harder hitting punches, which were quite witty an creative.
well worded did also but his didnt hit as hard.
both had nice structure.
well worded had a nice flow, while outcomes was a little off at times.
both had ok wordplay, and nice metas.
but outcome had a better verse an only just edged it.
well worded - structure was good.....flow was on target......vocab was ok.........metas were aight........wordplay was pretty basic......attempted punches, but i dont think most of them hit.........ok personals.......
outcome - structure was good......flow fell off a lil.......vocab was pretty good.......some of the metas were ok.......wordplay was good at times.........some of the punches connected nicely.......ok personals.....
breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - well
vocab - outcome
metas - tie
wordplay - well
punches - outcome
personals - outcome
conclusion - outcome takes this in vocab, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote......
VOTE - OUTCOME
Dick Ryders in here like crazy...
Blah...Quote:
[i]WellWorded[/u]
I'm a talk to someone dope..& I'll put in some good words
You need em'
Reading that freepost hurts worse then reading your verse!
Call'd for some1 wack & OutComes this bitch..scared,dumb
Seeing Out come with dope punches..Now thats a rare one!
Got rejected from Heaven..
Cuz they don't allow lesbians..thats you...so go to hell dyke
Can u say retard?
..This dumb fuck thought my custom title was spelt right!
This faggot supplies a Ill drop everytime..in fact he promises
He should atleast..He gets it from "ghostwriters" annonimous!
So if you ever want to see tha OutCome of this..you'll know..
To go look in tha obitauries..& start ya search under "O"
Punches good
Personals..eh..
Wordplay decent
Stucture good
Multies..eh..
Overall....14/20
Quote:
OutCome
First he was Tyler Durden now hes well worded
Changin name but a style switch is what you should perfer kid
i turn off this broken fauset so he can flow right
wrong plumbing if they were virgin pipes ya shit wouldnt be tight
You see guy, his vocabulary isnt perfect
its a front when it comes down to it i need ebonics to read verses
fuck it i reflect his wack crusen with mirrors
angel the directionto bounce off and make his wackness disapeer
Well worded comes off more badly said than the rest
like stuttering mutes missing whats said in spelling bees for the def
Look at this herb, the mods hada reset his post count
its like god giving wack another chance with another account
-a quick try-
Man what can i say about your skill thats unsaid
having talents somthing for you like talking dead
imaginary, and frankly psyics dont see it hap-ning
No Rapping skill, Dude just stick to UPS packaging
atleast when i Punch youll be down looking at UPS
Fuck your verse easy like god gave me some sluts
Im sorry if you dont agree, but denial hardly does
asking why your wack is written under just because
Eh...
Punches eh..
Personals decent
Wordplay eh..
Flow...eh..
Structure.. No Way
Overall.....11/20
V/Well Worded
He simply came harder
Better structure
Harder punches
No hate to outcome tho
Just an honest vote
ILLuntaic v.s B.I.Detained (Topical)
I liked different aspects from each persons' verse. WellWorded I think had better flow, its quite obvious. Outcome was off a bit at times, but it wasn't anything too major. But Wellworded flowed nicer. Had better structure. That's not really all that matters though. I like Outcomes wordplay more and the way he wrote this (style). I think he had harder punches & personals then well-worded. Not that well-worded had non-existent punches and what not, they were really nice as well. In my mind Outcomes just came harder at you.
vote- outcome