Lyric v. Michael Flatley

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I'll drop soon after
G'luck

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I'll type up now. Good luck.

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How the fuck are you better? Lying fuckin whore
Claimin original member, when ya joined in January 2004
Lemme guess, you were great when halls were hallowed
But that's a contradiction
Cuz even deep down, you manage to be shallow
Has ya all lonely, cuz with peeps ya ass is dull
And feeling a great emptiness
Similar to the one in ya skull
So take ya weak lyrics, all ya skills are errant
But don't feel bad
Cuz if the meek inherit the earth, you're the heir apparent

Look at ya Sig, How you kickin my ass when you the one bout to die
If we compared lyrics...Mine elevate so much yours look like pestacide
Your battles prolly get slept on, cause ya shit aint worth readin
Didn't believe you were as whack as peeps said...But seein is believing
Comin at me with big words...No one gives a shit bout ya vocab
You win...
...Nah the voters explanations will have mo punches than ya vers had
And I dun care where your from, my lyrics are felt world wide
Hack ya email where your gay conversations you confide
This battles done with...easy KO, you de-elevate with time
Bust ya self esteem at the seems...5-0 me like ya waist line

Lemme guess, you were great when halls were hallowed But that's a contradiction--> KNOCK OUT LINE LOVING IT.... I HELLA LEARN A LOT FROM THIS BATTLE...THE PUNCHES WAS GREAT AND MY VOTE GOES TO MICHAEL FLATLEY ... BUT HEY CHECK OUT MINE AND PLESE VOTE... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116545

This battle was pretty good but Lyric got it. He had the better punches, not saying that Flatleys weren't good its just that they weren't good enough and his personals weren't directed at any particular person they were like open disses. Both had a nice flow to it but Flatleys verse had bad structure in it, Lyric had one line out of place but that was all. No multis from either and Flatleys best line was his closer. He needs top add more multis and better metas but a good verse though. Due to the impact of his punches i give this one to Lyric.

VOTE_LYRIC
OPEN BATTLE(ME vs KO WANING'S)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116477

chea...thanks....up 1.....

Michael Flatley got this. His lines were all different lengths, but he managed to make it flow. what the hell? All i know is, he kept everything short and sweet, and just killed lyric.

Fav Lines:
Michael Flatley
So take ya weak lyrics, all ya skills are errant
But don't feel bad
Cuz if the meek inherit the earth, you're the heir apparent

Lyric:
Your battles prolly get slept on, cause ya shit aint worth readin
Didn't believe you were as whack as peeps said...But seein is believing

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Back again. Mmmmm. Ok. Tied, huh?
Well, more votes are needed
I'll try and up my post count this weekend so I can return poll votes
I'l give a good broken down explanation in just a bit
Hopefully, the mods will know I know what's up
And maybe they'll let it count

yo lyric got this, yo fatley i asn't feeling u at all man sry. my vote goes to lryic, i felt his flow alot mroe then urs dude.

vote goes to : lyric

K this was kinda tricky but my vote gonna have to go to micheal
micheal had way better vocab and wording and thats what really diferentiated the 2 rhymes.
lyric and micheal had good punches but because micheals was more complex he gets my vote

Flow:micheal even though his lines were pretty wacky lenghts(wierd)
Structure:micheal
Punches:lyric(that seeing is beliving one was tight)
Multis:noone nothiung really came acroos as a good multi
Personalls: micheal
vocab:micheal

overall micheal

now since i took the time to vote plz vote on my battle vs dissonnan or UNDEAD
because there dope

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michael dropped an o.k. verse.....a pretty basic and non complex one...but it wasn't dat good to beat lyric's verse...lyric's verse and punches ripped right through dis nigga like he was a paper shredder...anyway michael had weak punches and lots of filler and no real point of da verses diss was made....lyrics verse wasn't his best and sure as hell wasn't great....but my vote goes to lyric for having a better verse...with harder hitting punchlines. Michael try using compare and contrast to diss your opponent better and don't type up much filler...jus elevate...lyric put some better wordplay in there and keep on elevating but overall o.k. battle..

*vote on ma battles here*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116164
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114817
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114748
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Oh my god you are such an herb, I'll get your vote deleted for very apparant stupidity
Compare and contrast? That's the one of the lower levels of rap battles, kid
Constant metas? Some are ok, but you're saying I need more?
I used personals, get your head out of your ass
Personals are much harder hitting than fuckin metas
I hate to sway, but I've been drinking and your idiocy just irks me

I see that someone in modville wants to see me lose
Why?