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yo here go my verse
yo u's a circus act... probly a descendant of barnum and bailey//
talk a mean game but shows no offense... its ironic to kill me//
ill spit sick thoughtz till u wipe off all of the verbal infections//
words come laced wit virus... corrupt yo internet connections//
Ascusprobe cant help ya fam...cuz im tiltin yo globe//
u like dead cows on da farm... cuz im milkin yo soul//
plain and simple... i topple yo ass like jenga//
u'll neva be da top gun cuz i cut off ya trigga finga//
now im done wit dis fool... i hope hes finally figured it out//
dat my style is so strong i lift lyrical weightz wit my mouth//
leave incisions where it wont grow bak... and i aint talkin bout what u think//
u walkin on da decks of da titanic... battlin me yo ships gone sink//
now i can either let u get away wit dis battle... or i can get away wit one//
cuz da shit u spittin is like underachieving lyrics....dis is where i would be witout one//
victory swallows defeat.... so may u rest in peace wit feces//
Verse leave you mo shakin than a baby wit parkinson disease's rattle
I'm so much mo elevated than you...
...For you this really is an uphill battle
$carface? Aint no Tony Monatan cept for the way...ya gettin whack(ed)
Get your prewritten shit outta here bitch...
...no wonder you were PMin me fo a match
Can't get over your herbish title...Only newbs take names from real rappers
Mix mentally challenged MCs wit music?
...You get $carface the mutha fuckin 'Bass tard'
Look $carface I-can-be-a "newb" too...Dawg work on ya ~fuckin~ skills herb/
Blah...You can't emphasize weak rhymes...
...No matter how much you distract from ya verse//
Fuck your 60 posts...I see you hailin from Chi-town aka Da Windy city
I can see why its called that...
...With all the punches that be missin me
Any vote you gets a Dick ride...And you better hope you get some good ones
Cause without even tryin...
...you got straight up net-sonned
MY VERDICT
Yeah im gonna have to give this one to lyric cause $carface your shit was weak and looked pre-wrtein no multies no punches that stuck you had a few good attacks and personnals.
$car:a few good attacks on his name but still lacking performance you couldda done betta. ok flow but rymes didnt rhyme properly. 4/10
my favourite line:
"dat my style is so strong i lift lyrical weightz wit my mouth//
leave incisions where it wont grow bak... and i aint talkin bout what u think//"
Lyric:good drop nice flow and good attacks great personals nice structure. overall pretty good drop only needed more multies and harder hittin punches and betta worded attacks but overall good. 7/10
my favourite line:
"Any vote you gets a Dick ride...And you better hope you get some good ones"
Flow:lyr
structure:lyr
multies:lyr
humour:$car
punches:lyr
attacks:both
personals:lyr
MY VOTE: Lyric
[b]yea man i mean scarface is writing or keying shit like if he was doing a audio or some shit punches and personals poorly directed to his oponentQuote:
Originally Posted by UNDEAD
he has disses but they are not connecting very well dont really make sense
most of it is filler and doesnt conside with a battle verse of vet mentality
as for lyric had vet mentality and came with decent and better personals than scarface,kinda witty and just overall had his shit together to merk this cat and also scarface was kinda going in anohter zone and not even focusing at the battle at hand kinda just rhyming words a diss or two here and there but was not soly intended to lyric for the purpose of considing basic punches
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thanks guys...uppin for mo honest votes..leave a link and it will be hit
up2
hello....vote please
lyric took this 1 kinda easy.....he had a much harder verse and his experience on the site shone thru.........scarface u got a bit of elevatin to do but uve probably got the best structure ive seen from a newbie.....but wat does the structure count 4?lol n e way improve ur punches and personals and u shud start 2 elevate quicker and quicker.....take a trip 2 wackness emergency centre 4 tips.....n e way the battle was ight but lyric was overall the better battler and came alot harder.....he had a nice flow and vocab and wordplay.....scarface u need 2 improve on ya flow as it was of at times and vocab was minimal the 1 bad thing 4 lyric was the fact that he had sum stretched lines.......
any way lyric gets this
lyric as only u penskills and rule and instant can vote hit this up plz man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118326
thnx dawg
pz
aight heres my vote, and reasons why, i expect an honest one back now ya hea...
$carface- good verse, and ur new to this site. Meaning later on in time ull be even better. ya verse had good word play, u came good with the first line, the middle of ya verse was aight, nothing special, but it was aight, ya ending was the same nothing special, try to make each line ryhmes, looks better and sounds better in some ways. UNDEAD, this kat doesnt know wut hes talking about, hes just pissed hes gettin stomped in everyone of his battles. Im not gonna lie, but ya verse didnt cut it against lyric.
Lyric- we can all tell ur good. no lie there, ya verse was good, it kepted me interested in reading it. u stretched ur lines a bit just like me when i battle, i dont get why that is so bad, thats wut mostly hurts me when i battle, i think thats bullshit when people get on u about that, i guess they just dont read it the same. i like when u acted like bein a newb, that shit was hilarious. ya verse had good word play, multies, and sounded good when ready it, oh yeah good vocab.....LOL(about being a newb using weak vocab), but good verse.
Of course my vote is - LYRIC
hey leave an honest vote on this battle against UNDEAD, thanks
heres da link, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116985
scarface = ok nice flow in this piece, and also nice structure!! punches were weak on times and you had very lil personal in there!!! ya need to word on your punches and personals!!
lyric = ok also good flow and structure, punches were hittin for the most part and you had some nice personals in there.
vote = lyric- lyric wins this as he had wayyyyy better punches and he had also really good personals!!
pz