Americas controversy

I wrote this about a week ago check it and plz how bout some feed back?

Accana: *Clear Throught* Hello! all you good citizens! How are you all today? Thats good but I think you all look like shit

Police Cop: Hey! What the hell are you doing!? HEY STOP THAT!

Accana: Fuck off, I thought America was free...


This is now my 'buisness' yo with God as my witness//
All you fuckers out there wish you could've hit this//
But I guess you couldn't because of so much distance//
Cause I'm back to piss you off for real time buisness//

But I don't get it whats with all the fucken resistence//
You act as if I'm not there like I'm non exisistent//
For 'instance' I taunt but theres no assistence//
And I can see in your eyes you know you wanna beat this//

Has the American laws really effected the community//
Like were not free now where striped of our liberty//
They'be taken what they can't have like a girls virginity//
Pisses me off too I gotta build an Immunity//

Chorus(below)

Americas got there own fucking problems//
From the racist shit to the osama-bin-ladins//
And half of its from what they been hidin//
And guess what *CHUSH* Houston theres another problem//
*repeat*

Chous(above)

Its like America dosen't trust there own ways//
It 'plays' into our hand as we constuct our own ways//
We should take what we want and hope that it always stays//
And scrap the racist laws against Blacks and Gays//

Everyone has their own expectations//
But whats with the government and there fucken complications//
And there relations, with people from all the other nations//
They'd pull a gun out on anybody with pink skin to caucasion//

Its like there scared of whats gunna come from the future//
Like they'll have no rule except against cummuters//
and astuters, they piss me off like fucken disputers//
just like outlawing having sex on phone or computer//

But what the hell they gunna do, if you keep it under wraps//
they won't find out unless they plot some attacks//
and that too is under wraps but they don't give a crap//
Its like they run the country with there fucked up facts//

Chorus(below)

Americas got there own fucking problems//
From the racist shit to the osama-bin-ladins//
And half of its from what they been hidin//
And guess what *CHUSH* Houston theres another problem//
*repeat*

Chous(above)

I'm always alone anyways no one knows what im doing//
doing drugs like stuff from pot to chewing//
or getting fucked without knowing who the fuck im screwing//
or standing on stage listening to croud as there booing//

the croud and America's laws can kiss my fucking ass//
and with my chance that I got its just too good to pass//
I'll just hope that when its time I'll have time to last//
and try to make my stupidness a thing of the past//

America's laws on drugs are wrong too//
Its there choice weather they want to fucked up like I use to//
and boose too, everything from weed to chew//
and just about every drug that you could ever do//

this is not a country to jealous over//
the goverment alone is more fucked then world order//
half the council is almost never ever sober//
country smells of not gold rather a bad odor//

but I guess it all comes down to it is that were free//
to do what fuck our selves up and get arrested thats free//
sorry but I'll stick to layin low as you can see//
I'm not standing up for nobody but me//

Chorus(below)

Americas got there own fucking problems//
From the racist shit to the osama-bin-ladins//
And half of its from what they been hidin//
And guess what *CHUSH* Houston theres another problem//
*repeat*

Chous(above)

So I guess thats it were not really free! Were just watched untill we screw up ya see?
and then we get our asses thrown in jail or JoV just like me!

bottom line... America just ain't free...

reply to two other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread or it gets closed.
thanks.

ok I did....

You need to post the links in here.

nope, he gets one warning, thats it.
don't be so lax, eh?