The Peasants: Old School Pervert (Remix)

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Old School Pervert ( Remix )

Brix

I tell you what I get for kicks with those fat juicy lips
Have you sucking dick while your panties drop like Brix
See I flick a switch, but the type to never turn off
My appetites so vulgar I get sexual urges for Sloth
So Ayyyyeee you Guuyyss..peel back the Japs eye
But not the sort to say "The cream of Sum Yun Guy"
Turn away from the shy, & molest the incestuous young
Never go below the 16 mark b/coz I'm that well hung
"You been bathing in cow dung?"..smelly lil uterus
So scream if you must..while on ya feet & arse I bust
Its not Greed, Envy or Lust, just a plain old Perv'
W/ a tention for sexual serve that I no doubt deserve
Please observe..my mystique & gluttonous ways outshine
Any other sausage king..now this bitch's ass is Mine!!


I'm an old school pevert..ain't no point in lying
Nieve are the best to Insert..ain't no point in trying
Necrophilia can't escape me..ain't no point in dying
Tears just fuel me more..ain't no point in crying

Kwizikz

Ain't particular, I don't succumb to any racial boundaries
She's got lips & no teeth,its smoother when she's on her knees
When in uniforms...I love them,The nurse's one does the trick
I can't help it..7 times this month I been admitted to NHS sick
Just hide behind the curtains..Pull one off..Then sit & smile away
One piece of evidence, A "Somethin Bout Mary" givaway
But I don't give a fuck, It ain't hair gel, but it helps clear my skin
1 less strand of DNA to be found when I dump her panties in the bin
"Come my sweetie, step into the darkness, the emptyness is warm"
I promise to go slow, then fuck it..The virgin's hymen is torn
Set my phone to vibrate, watch her in scream in her school clothes
I love to choke her with her tie..While the pain makes her eyes close
Then pump away..Carry on til my Phallus is weak wit anticipation
Bust on her face, Just the way a perv artist displays decoration

I'm an old school pevert..ain't no point in lying
Nieve are the best to Insert..ain't no point in trying
Necrophilia can't escape me..ain't no point in dying
Tears just fuel me more..ain't no point in crying

hmmm...

This was a weird contrast. Brix went for a funny style, designed to make this seem lighthearted....some of what kwiz said was sick as fuck...thought th NHS line was hilarity.
for both of you, try not to just put words there for tha sake of words...cause some lines didn't make too much sense in the context.
This is one of the better perv pieces I've read. you guys gonna record it?

Lol. The vocab' etc was off on this because this will be
an audio track which you picked up on already. In Audio
terms the flow etc is near flawless. But for ya'll to read
best effects would come from downloading
Twisted--Old School Pervert Instrumental
Arse ache but you'll get our drift when you do.
We just changed/Modified etc
Thanx for the feedbk.
Yea Kwizikz is that damn Wierd haha.
Ya should hear him do it on the mic haha

loool
i thought both were pretty funny actually.
i see what mav said about too many words in the lines..but if it rhymes perfect in audio cant complain

even the hook was quite funny
some dope lines from both really...or should i replace dope with twisted and yet amusing
nhs line was good and the something about mary had me chuckling..
light hearted stuff..nothing serious
quite a refreshing read in a sense
peace

fin

Ready. Lets go..

Brix.. You had a nice style.. Could tell from the first bar that it would of been audio.. And the hook helped me deciphere that.. Lol.. Nice flow.. Quite funny aswell..
Sort of a sick topic.. But you didnt make it too vulgar.. (Yea right).. You pair of sick bastards.. Go get real sex instead of writing about it! Lol..
Favourite Lines..

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Brix

I tell you what I get for kicks with those fat juicy lips
Have you sucking dick while your panties drop like Brix

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Made me laugh..

Kwiz.. Your verse had a different style to Brix's.. Both were effective.. Flow and so on, blah blah.. You all heard it..
Your verse was slighty sicker.. But it was funnier in a way.. Thats probably my sick mind kicking in.. You two hoes have corrupted me.. Lol.. =/..
Favourite Lines..

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Kwizikz

But I don't give a fuck, It ain't hair gel, but it helps clear my skin
1 less strand of DNA to be found when I dump her panties in the bin

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And you know what.. The hook was surprisingly in-depth and had meaning and wordplay..

Props..

Pz..

uppin....we funny dudes....
....Brix came up with the idea...
But I went along with it scecptical,
But it came out hot I think...
Thanx for the feedbak on this..
Some respected heads givin constructive
criticism and advice N views helps people elavate

sorry to freepost but ill do this l8r!! coz i have to go out. and ill break it down for you!! pz

I am not even gonna say shit about the filler words because its audio and makin it flow is what its all about. Its clever and definitely risible in a twisted way. I would like to hear it to the track

Thanx for the Feedbk. Will be audio as soon as we can

yea. audio soon u mo fo