I Thought I luv'd Her

Man I thought shyt was flowin so good// got a crib that wasnt in the heart of tha hood//I thought that me and shorty could//avoid tha down falls that leave ya sayin could've should've aw fucc it I would//but I didnt realize ole gurl was succin me dry//and I dont mean tha time I shot that nut in her eye//I mean I was so fucc'd up my 3rd eye became blind//and that lead to tha beginning of my demise............I realize.............

You need to leave 2 links of replies that you left on some one elses piece and post them in here or this will get closed, Thanks.

why the fuck are peeps posting such garbage in OM.... seriously, im sick of looking at verses and seeing this sorta thing... put some effort into it, and lengthen them.....

Too short .. fix your structure, make it more complex .. better vocab ?
Keep writin'