Fl~O~mETry vs Freeza

iight

as many lines as you want
no shit like d/r
hatin
any of that shit is out
explained votes, only way we elavate

Freeza's verse heres my verse

rap's a pussy... and your a toothless dike...
it seems u cant put a bite into what u like...
like a tireless bike...you can't make your move...
an illitorate playin scrabble...ur gunna loose...
i suck at battlein...yet im still better than you...
people be mistakin you for Clay Aiken dude...
your lines are played...but u claim to be unique...
dont be rude...let your leders speak...
cuz imma new grandfather...cuz when you see the light...
you'll realize your a newb(orn)...cuz i just sonned you twice...
like Bruce in the dessert...your punches dry...*
tryin to get around me...you wont get by...
it's annoying when you come...like vexatious masterbations...
why is your scum ass stayin?...mayb this board has bad sanitation...
your facin deflation...your baloon just dropped...
you claim to be money...but your stocks just dropped...
i can go around...sayin i crushed you in defeat...
but i'm too lazy..to peel you off the bottom of my feet...
i wish i could press delete...and get rid of your space...
but I'd rather wait...to type fuck you in front of your face...

*Freeza's verse

fuck, that link that says freeza's verse against sum1 else, it goes along with that line with the * on it

come on man drop your verse

ha ha this is funny uppin this I'll vote once freeza

Yo Fuck with me and I will Burn ya Cabbage
Im a Rap Inventor like Computers to Charles Babbage
Cause it is Bitches to Blast Chickens to Smash
I ain`t Cass But I still Rep Pistolvania
Fuck da Tubes being tied I still will bang ya
And let you bite da Chrome Hollows piercing ya dome
And tell ya Bitch to don` t ever stand alone
Cuase I be at ya home wit da Tech
Da slugs will eat you alive like Hannibal Lech
I have ya Bitch boy in Check
Way too late to call a doctor
I proably got more cakes Then Betty Crocker
But on some realness you probably never had a Gun
You is probably the Fuckin Preachers son

iight this bitch finally posted, uppin f'real, n explained votes, no bullshit

uppin

hhmmmmm......fair battle

i say fl~o~metry took this

his verse had better everythin really......better werdplay....better flow....sum good metas in there.....freeza's flow was way off.....not really feelin that........sum places it was on and others it was just way off.........structure was off also.........dude, just keep battling......you'll get better...............

v/ fl~0~metry

peace

thanx for the vote most definately, uppin for mo votes please

Freeze ok flow and structure and ur punches was really played too me u really need to upgrade ur punches lol and ur personals u need more and u need them too connect

Flo - I was feeling ur verse much better and u had a nice flow and ur structure was ok but u need to work on ur personals make sure that they connect also. that all i have to really say on that

V/ Flo

thanx again, 2-0 me, n this the third time uppin, so please vote

aight my vote- Flometry

reason:
flometry- u had a good verse. Good structure, aight wordplay, it was easily red. Ya punches were aight. Ya vocab was good. U had some good parts and bad parts as well, but mostly good. U didnt really have to spit so many lines, but i guess u didnt know how much was enough, and thats straight. Over all a good verse.

Freeza- ya verse was not that good, No hate, just didnt really entrest me. U gotta have a verse thats intresting when u spit it, unless ur facing someone shitty like Brandon, as u can tell with my battle against him. Ya vocab, was nothin special, ya structure kinda off, yo wordplay, kinda off. Ur verse was nothin special. Just elevate and get better, not hate to ya man.

vote-Flometry

hit this up with an honest one, do that same now ya hea, this battle aint nothin special, just take the time to voteon mines like i did urs aight, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122404

thanx for the votes for real , i want this battle doe with, uppinX4

ight let break it down

Flow - ya had a nice flow to ya verse man i liked it . structure wasnt bad, could of been a lil better but it was good enough. ya hit him with some nice hard punches and a few ok personals in ya verse aswel. vocab was good, there was room for improve ment but over all nice verse man


freeze - hmm not a bad verse, ya didnt really hit many good personals. flow was ok, but ya structure wasnt pretty bad. ya didnt hit drop any good punches, some of ya lines were just about you, which isnt very good in a battle, ya need to concentrate on abusing ya opponent.
overall not as bad verse, but not good either, room for improvement. keep tryin man.

v/ flow - took it pretty easy
keep tryin tho guys

ight

uppin

FloMetry:

Ok verse consistent , wasn’t hard hitting. Your opener was good
You fell off a little at the end. Nothing really was spectacular.
Structure was ok. Rhyme scheme was there. Try to work on
Cleverness with personals.


Freeza:

Ok structure ok, complexity nothing there. Flow was there
Cleverness none. Work on punches, and clever personals
Can’t stress that enough. Seem like your near the end you
Was trying harder then the middle portion not consistent.
Try to stay consistent.

Vote: Flo…due to better verse …punches…






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