10-15 lines i spit first no d/r no hate
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10-15 lines i spit first no d/r no hate
Checkity Checking in.... For peeps that know me..... I'm back......
this nigga surrposed to spit after this but i bet he'll choke/
ima take a break now let me have a smoke/
..ok im back now and im ready to murk you
yeah you and your whole fucking crew
Ill even throw your momma some punchs too
you know let me tell you something bout your momma she like to dickride alot just like you
fuck she even like it in the ass like you too
dam nigga this shit over already
go sit down and watch your tele
and faten your bellie
Here goes nothing...
This fag has got 2 dudes in an icon, he supports gay entertainment+
Gets wins by DQing & postpones, just ask Super Flows to explain it+
ya could freestyle in a linear jet, but still cant break sound+
You tried to stomp a whole in my verse, but couldnt break ground+
Tryna act rash? I 'smoke ya mild' & leave ya 'Blacks~Ash'+ (blacksash)
and have broke wit no funds like stock market crashed+
Flow is hard to decipher, like cursive writing in ya icon
you can write mafia like lyrics, but to me ya still a pison+
Rip ya on the battle field, open mic, in poetry & in your basement+
and ya mug under construction, like WWE Divas with a face lift+
Upping #1 for votes.... Born to Kill, if your reading this.... Ur next to taste my wrath old friend...... NO beef though....
Clearly a merk by Antonio...
Blacksash came with gay disses schoolyard kids would throw and momma lines.
And blended them with a horrible, choppy format.
Banderas just spit and won.
Nothing dramatic or vicious.
Just good, solid wordplay and metas that made for impacting punches.
Sash got sonned. Bad.
Peace (I've got 3 battles going, Antonio...as soon as one closes, my man...)
Upping #2 for votes.... Who ever else wants to battle, "VETS ONLY" PM me
NO beef though....
Black: very weak punches, had basically no flow, fluency or evident structure to the verse...You need to up these attributes...have a look in tutorials..
Antonio: You came out much harder...you had some nice wordplay goin on..:
"ya could freestyle in a linear jet, but still cant break sound+
You tried to stomp a whole in my verse, but couldnt break ground+
Tryna act rash? I 'smoke ya mild' & leave ya 'Blacks~Ash'+"
and your punches were much deeper and much more complex....You had some decent flow, nothin' to go mad about but it came out better than Black's mos def...try to use some more internals, it'll spice it up a bit...you had nice sturcture th0....liked the finisher..lol:
"Rip ya on the battle field, open mic, in poetry & in your basement+
and ya mug under construction, like WWE Divas with a face lift+"
Vote: Antonio Banders..
can u hit up my topical against "Funksta"..only needs 1 vote.
blacksash.......need to elevate....seemed like you didnt try in this battle...and that cost you the battle.........flow was below average....didnt have any multis and you wordplay has horrible......elevate...no hate
antonio........didnt see much skill here....you should have killed him on this....but the only tight shit was some of your punches and nice personnels.....i expected betta vocab.....you merked him thou
vote=antonio
Upping #3 for votes.... Who ever else wants to battle, "VETS ONLY" PM me
NO beef though....
I think Antonio got this one, here's the br8k down
Punches and Personals-Antonio got these categories easy, he juss came harder and wittier.......But I've seen him come way better.......
Structure and Flow-Antonio, Blacksash had a fucked up structure and flow was off bad, he needs to elevate on these categories...
Vocabulary and Wordplay-Antonio, he came better with wittier lines, better vocabular, that was more complex...........
Conclusion-
Antonio takes this easier with more complex punches, better flow, and more wittiness, which wins battles for you easily.......
Vote/Antonio Banderas
Since I took time on yours, take time on mine and make an honest vote, to return the favour with an honest vote.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145510
Damn AB took this all the way with just this
ya could freestyle in a linear jet, but still cant break sound+
You tried to stomp a whole in my verse, but couldnt break ground+
Tryna act rash? I 'smoke ya mild' & leave ya 'Blacks~Ash'+ (blacksash)
and have broke wit no funds like stock market crashed+
harder hitting punches and shit also Back needs to work on better stucture and a better way of punching really no hate though
vote.............AB
Upping #4 for votes.... Who ever else wants to battle, "VETS ONLY" PM me
NO beef though....
This fag has got 2 dudes in an icon, he supports gay entertainment+
Gets wins by DQing & postpones, just ask Super Flows to explain it+
ya could freestyle in a linear jet, but still cant break sound+
You tried to stomp a whole in my verse, but couldnt break ground+
Tryna act rash? I 'smoke ya mild' & leave ya 'Blacks~Ash'+ (blacksash)
and have broke wit no funds like stock market crashed+
that popped to a high definition to murking at its best... its pretty damn simple who one this battle
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this nigga surrposed to spit after this but i bet he'll choke/
ima take a break now let me have a smoke/
..ok im back now and im ready to murk you
yeah you and your whole fucking crew
Take this fake ass shyt to Gold and Silver... cuz you got fuck from who ever you bought ya talent from... i've seen better walmar verse's kid... elevate... even ya shyt... spit hard, ill, definate... be great... the opposite of this
Caesar - On3