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alright checkin in
ey yo kool killa is hard, he moved all the way up to flyweight
and changin sexuality is hard, homo is hard ta get strate
but its okay, dunno why im battlin this fool
kool killa until my glock leave em dead in his own blood pool
its cool cuz even tho i know nuttin about you
ima rip into u nigga, like black people eatin black food! LOL
no wait, ima come so hard, dis nigga'll go insane
hemorraghes at the brain! the only head u EVER got manne
oh no this flow has made this nigga a believer
bobbin his head so hard, made this nonepileptic have ceasers
"how can this kid rap so good? When he's not from the streetz"
"man I (kool killa) have no effect when all hes brangin is heat!"
but lay back its strate now! kool killa laid down to rest
n the best, he can't contest, just like all the rest! NIGGAS!
notice novice the ownage told in these dope scripts; you blow dicks..
your dads penis been in you mouth longer than your throat is
meaning you suck! its crystal clear and no i wont debate it
cause your the wackest ever!---you can thank God your over rated
there couldve been worse rhymes....iam wrong! null are
you verses couldnt be red/read if you changed the font color
you want to be an mc representa?..then please stop rapping
cause your so wack i mistaken you for a penile contraction
upping this for the people to see.......dont sleep kids
vote and post your links...favors will be returned
Aight, I vote for kool killa.
Killa, he had a better flow. notice. novice, ownage, multies like that kept it goin. Strucute was pretty good, better than the first cats lines. Personals weren't too good but alright. Pretty even with the first kids. Structure is what made it stand out.
first cat..even tho the punches were pretty even, your structure was off. Not by much, still shows that your not a complete newb to writing, but still kinda low level(no hate). I thought that if you woulda just had sum more creative punches that you woulda won it on that alone. good try man, but i gotta give it to killa.
Vote killa.
Kool had the concept of punches more here..... but neither was really puttin it down. Both lacked decent wordplay and personals, the punches were eh... at best. vote goes to Kool for better punches. Both need to elevate alot. Kool you been at this too long to not be better than that!
vote - Kool
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
aight aight I vote for KoolKilla hes was much better
FUCC BLOODZ
lmao, i didnt need to try to beat him though...Quote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
upping...
and damnit axiom