''Climb Vines'' {MA}

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...68#post1412768

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...94#post1412794

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I like to learn words that I've never known for certain
and compose verses 'cause I'm mostly uncomposed in person

Continuous lyrical wonders make every sentence great
plain lack of flavour won't appeal to my sense of taste
I leave my pen amazed when my brain invents a phrase
with phlegm that stains any train within my venoms range
Descriptive predictive pictures sent to demonstrate
a future producer painting literature signed and signatured
Intent to penetrate on waves of hidden changing vision
to straight stun the mundane with untamed creative rhythm
Calculate how insane your driven, its fantasticly accurate
I unwound my tape and found my madness immaculate
Pads are padded cells I have to travel quick to capture it
photographic, written word's an insanity laxative
This inner being's packing his own emotional baggages
and has the wrists of a twisted nymphomaniac masochist
Every slash and slit is reworded into perfect verses
the animal's in man doesn't matter if a person searches
An idea deserves its rightful time in the limelight
just enough to interpret if its life long or its finite
That's why I hide hidden meaning inside of fine lines
through mutual respect intelects check my similies & likewise
Shadows see my imagery that's how bright my prime shines
I haven't heard it surface since I first learned to climb vines

I like to learn words that I've never known for certain
and compose verses 'cause I'm mostly uncomposed in person

*tumble weed*

I nrpelied to this already, what the fuck?

On this site?

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Originally Posted by Mahatma

On this site?

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I thought so. Cause i said to you 'sup mahatma, what brings you to this slit neck of the woods?'

Ah yeah, maybe it got deleted some how?

Iunno, i just remember replying to this once. Pretty dope piece, liked the flow alot, opening bar was sick. This piece shouldnt be slept on.


Props.

Cheers... let the sleeping continue.

This was a dope piece,I can't believe people are sleeping on this.
I see that you are venturing out?
What happened with the BBoy Forum anyway?
Get at me.
Peace.

Boo````Ya```

B-Boys been down a while .. sadly. :^/

Nice piece. Mahatma has always been one of my favorite peeps on B-boys. You and 9thCell at least lol.

Enjoyed the rhyme scheme and imagery. Niceness.

Thanks Paperback and Papermate, 9th's the dopeness, no doubt about it. Media Assassins like impregnating pages.

Raise the bars.