U know the rules 10-15 lines drop ya verse in no more then 15 mins
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U know the rules 10-15 lines drop ya verse in no more then 15 mins
Check it, This dude claims hes a philosopher but he cant predict nuttin
Keep rappin wack rhymes and wake up to head bussin
You act all hard struttin around with a nine
only time you use it is for target practice and use it in rap lines
I come to burn Mcs not to watch fake ones
Especially when they act thug and pack fake guns
You always on the block makin the same old raps
When you spit its like you having a heart attack
Now Im back with a vengeance, flows is relentless
Cuz I'll burn you alone i dont need no defenders
Skill you lack and your in a state of 911
So call me the savior cuz ma initials stand for one
Yo listen
I isolate ya spirit from ya mortal body
I'll have u writin ya feared thoughts in formal diaries
Loadin up the pistol with exclusive clips in
Before Christ(BC) i put this rap game on crucifixion
I crave for blood like ruthless crips, give u a hectic experience
deflect these inferiors, let em know im seriously superior
You reppin VA, but really u reppin Vaginal Attire
u dont get close my rhymes electricute u like lateral wires
ya bitch liked to be popped give her more fingers than ya green icon man
it might sound blatant when i say i mean i got ya life on smash
This kid so weak ill choke em he wont live he'll die
Wanna battle me just for a loss so i told him to post his quick reply
U must have underestimated the strength, Jesus, i give him the beegees
HOw many CAPITAL LETTERS DO I GOTTA TYPE TO LET U KNOW U JUST
A lil bc
lol
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lilBC- first of all, if you gonna use wordplay do it right. because a philosipher doesnt predict the future. your punches were weak. phil hit a lil harder on that. your flow was choppy. only thing decent was your closer
phil- he's just ill.. nice opener his style is more complexed. his name fits him well because of the way he speaks. he was original (once again) came hard with the punches and wordplay.. structure and flow was a little better. only problem with this i saw was that the closer was weak as hell.
Vote- philosopha
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Phil- you had every thing flow structure wordplay everything your flow was god and so was your structure I saw some personals and some punches that were attempted to hit and did... wordplay was betta den the otha and so was your vocab overall you were a 8/10
BC- ehh your verse was good nuttin out of the ordinary structure flow wordplay punches personals nottin that good your verse wasnt that enjoyable either your verses overall stat was a 5/10
vote phil
Check it, This dude claims hes a philosopher but he cant predict nuttin
Keep rappin wack rhymes and wake up to head bussin
good
You act all hard struttin around with a nine
only time you use it is for target practice and use it in rap lines
good
I come to burn Mcs not to watch fake ones
Especially when they act thug and pack fake guns
nice
You always on the block makin the same old raps
When you spit its like you having a heart attack
Now Im back with a vengeance, flows is relentless
Cuz I'll burn you alone i dont need no defenders
Skill you lack and your in a state of 911
So call me the savior cuz ma initials stand for one
good overall
I isolate ya spirit from ya mortal body
I'll have u writin ya feared thoughts in formal diaries
Loadin up the pistol with exclusive clips in
wack
Before Christ(BC) i put this rap game on crucifixion
I crave for blood like ruthless crips, give u a hectic experience
deflect these inferiors, let em know im seriously superior
wack
You reppin VA, but really u reppin Vaginal Attire
u dont get close my rhymes electricute u like lateral wires
ya bitch liked to be popped give her more fingers than ya green icon man
it might sound blatant when i say i mean i got ya life on smash
This kid so weak ill choke em he wont live he'll die
Wanna battle me just for a loss so i told him to post his quick reply
U must have underestimated the strength, Jesus, i give him the beegees
HOw many CAPITAL LETTERS DO I GOTTA TYPE TO LET U KNOW U JUST
A lil bc
Your whole shit was wack
Soon ill be able to vote :)
it's pretty clear who won...
bc- I mean, not bad, for someone new around here. Like someone else said nothing out of the oridinary. It wasn't that bad compared to half the newbs who try to rap. You did have some attempts at punches, a few... they came very weak however, but you had them. Little self- glorifying, I would advice not to do that either anymore. Direct ur punches and personals better, better wording, you'll be fine..
phil- nothing amazing in ur verse, but nothing really outstandishly horrible. I'd say a pretty average verse from you. You had ur punches, fairly consistent on throwing them, some of them were pretty weak and some were alright. Had a few personals, which I liked... a little creativity and attempts at originality. Not bad, keep up.
vote- phil
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134232
pz
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keep personal beef out of here ... your ass aint even got enough post to vote yet..so just stay out . period. HATERQuote:
Originally Posted by Sao The Don
Check it, This dude claims hes a philosopher but he cant predict nuttin
Keep rappin wack rhymes and wake up to head bussin
This was wack
You act all hard struttin around with a nine
only time you use it is for target practice and use it in rap lines
Boooooooooo
I come to burn Mcs not to watch fake ones
Especially when they act thug and pack fake guns
Fake guns...common
You always on the block makin the same old raps
When you spit its like you having a heart attack
This was decent
Now Im back with a vengeance, flows is relentless
Cuz I'll burn you alone i dont need no defenders
Booooo but ok for your skill level
Skill you lack and your in a state of 911
So call me the savior cuz ma initials stand for one
Not bad
I isolate ya spirit from ya mortal body
I'll have u writin ya feared thoughts in formal diaries
Ok ok not bad
Loadin up the pistol with exclusive clips in
Before Christ(BC) i put this rap game on crucifixion
This was good wordplay, good job
I crave for blood like ruthless crips, give u a hectic experience
deflect these inferiors, let em know im seriously superior
THis was wack..
You reppin VA, but really u reppin Vaginal Attire
u dont get close my rhymes electricute u like lateral wires
OK...Pretty good
ya bitch liked to be popped give her more fingers than ya green icon man
it might sound blatant when i say i mean i got ya life on smash
Not bad, but elevate
This kid so weak ill choke em he wont live he'll die
Wanna battle me just for a loss so i told him to post his quick reply
No..Boooooooo
U must have underestimated the strength, Jesus, i give him the beegees
HOw many CAPITAL LETTERS DO I GOTTA TYPE TO LET U KNOW U JUST
A lil bc
not bad, but still bad
V.phil
Punches and Personals: Philosopha came and hit harder and outnumbered the punches from BC. BC barely had any personals either. Point -- P
Vocab: Elementary vocab from BC, very nice vocab and use of words from Philosopha. Point -- P
Opener: BC's was pretty weak and Phil's was decent and creative. Point -- P
Closer: BC's was just better. Not much more to it. Point -- BC
Flow and Structure: Phil was more consistent and bars were the same length. BC's varied more often and were sometimes uneven. Point -- P
Wordplay: Definitely goes to Phil, he just came with more originality and creativity. Point -- P
5-1 P wins
Vote -- Philosopha
please hit at least one of my battles up cuz i took the time for urs..
Rule vs. Kwiksand
Rookie vs. Kwiksand
TomER vs. Kwiksand
thanks