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yo yo yo yo ayo nigga
I spit that gangsta shit nigga
you're not ready son...
AYO!
You're not wack,you just need help with this rhyme shit.....
Thats why I'll leave Kre-z dope, flat out..........unconscious
You're dyin` bitch,even psychics know you're destined to lose
You dangerous?
Cause you're known to pull out knifes and get cut from crews
So watch me walk all over Kre-z, like an old ass doormat..
Nigga how can you beat me?....
............When you write your verses in a paragraph format!!
Thats it!, I always come hard, while Kre-z comes flacid...
Throw your fecies at you....to prove you drop that wack shit
Yep thats my demeanor,my meanness is known to hurt
Cause when Z's dont end your name,..
....................Its whats peeps do, when readin' your verse!
Put that in your fuckin pipe and smoke it bitch!
woooooooooooooooooooo!
Punk ass nigga think he gone make me fall
Weak ass punches, nigga fuckin learn to brawl
Do you really think I’m gone break
Like the first time you went to jail when you got fucked by an inmate
Samuel Same Old Tired Ass Rhymes
Ya tires ass mind, ya tired ass lines
Ya weak fucked up bars wit no skill
Unlike the title of RB you defining Ill
Your defining shit wit ya whole rhyme
Ya wackness shines out like a red light-beam
You see a real rapper then you start to scream
And even if you kill me I’ll still be in ya fuckin dreams
Cause I’m the nightmare you thought you’d never see
Thine ending by the holy sword I’ma bout to kill thee
The ass wuppin don’t don’t put you to work
Samuel my slave you just got murked
BIATCH
wooooooooooooooooo!
that was fire son.
that spit was straight killin` shit nigga.
lets get some votes on this hot battle
uppin for some votes now
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upping this shit for some votes
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Yo People Don't Sleep On This Shit, damn!!!!!!!!!!!!
Come on people, this has been looked at loads, come on people vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im a nice guy
so i will vote
cuz im nice like that
You're not wack,you just need help with this rhyme shit.....
Thats why I'll leave Kre-z dope, flat out..........unconscious
i duno if u were havin a conversation with him or wat...
weak..1/5
You're dyin` bitch,even psychics know you're destined to lose
You dangerous?
eh..1/5
Cause you're known to pull out knifes and get cut from crews
So watch me walk all over Kre-z, like an old ass doormat..
the simile is played..knives one seemed the wittiest out of the whole verse..2.5/5
Nigga how can you beat me?....
............When you write your verses in a paragraph format!!
decent..2/5
Thats it!, I always come hard, while Kre-z comes flacid...
Throw your fecies at you....to prove you drop that wack shit
when u use shit in a line it seems to b played in almost every single way..
in this case it was kinda the same..2/5
Yep thats my demeanor,my meanness is known to hurt
Cause when Z's dont end your name,..
....................Its whats peeps do, when readin' your verse!
didnt realli flow..it was an okay ending..2/5
Overral = 10.5
I think you had enough punches to clear out Kre..but sumtimes ur flow was off, and i felt you had 1 or 2 fillers which deprived the verse of its "could-be-betterness"
Punk ass nigga think he gone make me fall
Weak ass punches, nigga fuckin learn to brawl
no...0/5
Do you really think I’m gone break
Like the first time you went to jail when you got fucked by an inmate
has sam been to jail?..0.5/5
Samuel Same Old Tired Ass Rhymes
Ya tires ass mind, ya tired ass lines
wtf..where the punches at?..0/5
Ya weak fucked up bars wit no skill
Unlike the title of RB you defining Ill
i duno how u went from unlike to him defining ill...0.5/5
Your defining shit wit ya whole rhyme
Ya wackness shines out like a red light-beam
gay simile..try to use wittier similes if ur gona use em for my sake :evilgrin: 0.5/5
You see a real rapper then you start to scream
And even if you kill me I’ll still be in ya fuckin dreams
so ur his worst nightmare...i c...1/5
Cause I’m the nightmare you thought you’d never see
Thine ending by the holy sword I’ma bout to kill thee
look like u forced the flow..0.5/5
The ass wuppin don’t don’t put you to work
Samuel my slave you just got murked
umm..didnt realli diss him..i guess0/5
BIATCH
^i didnt see no need for this...
:nono:
Overral = 3
Your flow at sometimes seemed forced and you had no punches/wordplay/meta's or any of that sort..you need to elevate..go to the help section on the bottom page of the forum maybe that'd help but i doubt it
lol
Vote = Sam
hit up the link in the sig
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Originally Posted by Simile
oops sry about that i was tryna edit summin instead i quoted myself
lol
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roflmao
thanks for uppin the thread for us though.
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This wasnt the hottest battle in the world...pretty one sided...Samuel took this pretty easily...Punches and everything were on his side....Kre-z...you need to elevate something terrible....look at some other battles, try and pick up on some wordplay and shit...thats really all this battle needs as far as explaination...but to make sure it counts...i'll point out some lines....
You're dyin` bitch,even psychics know you're destined to lose
You dangerous?
Cause you're known to pull out knifes and get cut from crews
that was my favorite line by far...caught me off gaurd...lol...nice drop...
Vote Samuel...
PS ...return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig...
I cant' vote yet but I'ma give my thoughts. This battle wasn't the hottest. I'd vote for Samuel though. Both of you need to work on your rhymes. Anyone can rhyme one syllable. Try more complex ones.
Help me out closing these battles.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134509
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135604