Subliminal message

Shadowsk8er- katie

Sefton Blake- the sleeping cheif

Test six at his best, bitch you're running the gauntlet
Here's my two pennies dropped at full weight and dauntless
Eviserating cats like the Ka's evil twin
Holy thoughts reign supreme and stay speeding to win
Ignorance is evaporated with supersonic beams
Doubtlessly left submerged in potent tonic dreams
Don't test, don't stress at the back of the race
Energy quadruples when you slacken the pace
Nostradamas philosophies, the armageddon
Many years from now or maybe minutes left to wet 'em
Enough with the bullshit, i'll take my charge
Superspeed 'round mars with electric guitars
Seeding knowledge in fertile minds that open
Averaging out at brilliance key'd with an old pen
Generously distracted, royally released
Each and every criminal wronged impeached
Intellectualism is a dying movement
Soundlessly perishing wherever the groove went
Improvement is necessary like incenduary
Lashing through mediocraty i'll send for free
Leanience is lost, lets expand the narration
Neo-societies, lets build a planned nation
Evidence is collected and placed in vestiges
Souped up correctly so you wouldn't mess with this
So can you cats tell me what the hidden message is?


(edit)- thanks for the feedback fella's. since i dont wanna up this again i'm posting here. here's a hint for the people who haven't worked out the "hidden message" yet.



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do you see it?

rofl - this was "ill" - flow in the first half was sick - second half had some iffy spots - but I guess it depends on where you pause at, etc - nice word choice throughout - and just throwing out dope thoughts - cool beans - keep at it

ya flow was definitely better in the first half like smz pointed out....it was crazy ill tho...imma listen to sum ya of ya shit on soundclick soon....i liked ya piece bout tha 18 year old friend dyin too.....holla at me man....pz

uppin' this once. cheers for the feedback fellas. thanks lethal, for reppin 2 of my pieces, rest assured you're getting a rep on the next piece you drop.

aight u "cheeky bastard" (lmao)
that was sick
actually I can't tell u the hidden message
but u had sum sick vocab in there nice shit
I think ur flow depends on pauses and beat...was hard for me to get it
the line I didn't like was:"Superspeed 'round mars with electric guitars"..well wuteva
but the line I liked most was:"Seeding knowledge in fertile minds that open"

all in all well done...sick but creative

This Piece Was unique...

Got your message out somewhat good.
Flow was there topic wise was ok...
was pretty interesting.Nice structure
vocabulary was pretty good, using words
to express oneself...didnt really dig the style.


Over all pretty good open mic...

Really enjoyed this shit yo...ya Flow was on point...liked the concept..it was unique.....Good delivery.....and structure was okay

Overall=B

i really liked the flow to this.. was on point and right. the vocab was superb too. really throwing hints and nice rhymes to let us know what the 'hidden message' is.. lol even though with all of that i still don't know what it is. but anyways.. overall good shit, man. keep it up.