Fucked up mentally

Yo i bust clips fuck this world it aint givin me shit/
Um buggin out like ah crackhead who wants a hit/
Cus i wanna flip but i cant yo um about ta bug out/
This world’s stressin me its like i cant rhyme without dout/
Da pressures on now um forced ta do somethin drastic/
Next thing i know one of my boys are rapped up in plastic/
Now my anger is getting mixed up with grief/
Now um contemplating ta knockout some bodies teeth/
Cus um breakin down cant even sleep no more/
Gotta think about if niggaz are gonna come run in my door/
Now um gotta go to da funeral and look at his body/
Now um gotta remember those niggaz who took him from me/
Da devils got me so now um doin somethin mean/
Getting locked behind bars and um only fifteen/
Cant even look in my moms eyes without seein her pain/
Got her thinkin up in her mind is her son insane/
And um got my father thinkin if he raised me right/
Should he hav let my black ass go out that night/
Am i da one ta blame or is it my parents fault/
When i was fucked up should they hav came when i callt/
Now um up in court with ah sticky ass lawyer/
That can give ah fuck about winnin like De la Hoya/
Got one of those white judges from back in da day/
Slave owner type of cat talkin bout nigga ya gonna pay/
Now um screwed and fucked up mentally/
Jury said my sentence is gonna be da death penalty/

Yo i replied to these posts below:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156525

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155943

not bad.... but id say take out the /'s they dont look good... and also the net gangster thing is kinda stupid.... just my opoinion... not bad had some good lines... showed how messed people get...

take a look at losing hope

nothing great but not bad....keep at it.