Tricksta Vs Jemille

heres the thread...

Rules:
No hate votes
No crew votes
No dickridin
etc etc

10 bars min-20 bars max

Deadline-Tomorrow Night

ill drop after u coz im tired of fuckin duckers

pz

Let me jest get it started right.

From what i seen yo rhymes stank like chitlens,/
So imma put ya dimes on ice like frozen chickens,/
This is freestyle kid no time for them wak lines u known fo shittin,/
I make writtens i rap as lethal as throat slittin,/
So when caps get showered and u shootin out fecal i'll make ya sip-it./
No sequels for the end of this match,/
Napalm dropped like a C-4 latch,/
Snatch, slash, crash, bash, flash, stash, and smash,!
All verbs about what'll happen when we clash,/
You think you can beat me cuz im new here,/
You think i might run? Not before i smear the queer(you)/
Uh oh you aint havin no fun? My bad too much fear for one pun,/
Heres a trick for lil Tricksta, heres a snicka(candy bar), aint no rat poison thicka'./
Bye bye lil kid come back to fight me when when ya rap gets big./

off the top o the head..

u call that shit a verse,ive seen better 'wraps' on tunics/
u gettin 'fucked' 'nasty',more than 'britney' in 'fake' porn flix/
couldnt put 'shit' 'down' layin a punch on 'mr hanky'/
with heavy 'artillery' ya rookie ass couldnt 'tank' me/
u think yaw sumthin 'speshul' u juss run of the 'mille'/
if u were runnin fast an forward u still be on tha 'back heel'/
coz u juss a 'fake',like pammys tits was made of silicone/
battle me?a 'rocky' path,ill push u,leave a 'rollin' 'stone'/
ill serve u up 'raw' n 'bloody' like bare-knuckle nosebleeds/
id still leave u 'locked out',if u bought a 'bunch' of 'keys'/
name sounds like a bitch,ur only 'attitudes' 'pre menstural'/
you just a newbie 'herb',an tha punches u 'plant' is 'floral'/
if u were twice as 'angry' u still couldnt be called 'mean'/
ur idea of 'smokin faggs' is like buyin tubs of 'vaseline'/
im 'walkin on air',u could even call this battle 'floor-less'/
its like who wants to be a winner?and im leavin u 1 guess/

start votin yall...

^^^^uppin^^^^

good battle nice punches on both sides here's my favs.

tricksta=" u gettin 'fucked' 'nasty',more than 'britney' in 'fake' porn flix/"

jemille="So imma put ya dimes on ice like frozen chickens,/"

besides the punches being even this is what sets the verses apart

flow= trick
wordplay=trick
voclab=trick
multis= trick

jemille had the punches but they didn't seem to go with the verse the best so my vote is for tricksta

aight TRICKSTA

Quote:

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u call that shit a verse,ive seen better 'wraps' on tunics/
u gettin 'fucked' 'nasty',more than 'britney' in 'fake' porn flix/
couldnt put 'shit' 'down' layin a punch on 'mr hanky'/
with heavy 'artillery' ya rookie ass couldnt 'tank' me/

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aight Jemille

Quote:

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From what i seen yo rhymes stank like chitlens,/
So imma put ya dimes on ice like frozen chickens,/
This is freestyle kid no time for them wak lines u known fo shittin,/
I make writtens i rap as lethal as throat slittin,/

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aight battle but tricksta sorta took this hands down keep elevatin tho jemille.

Vote:TRICKSTA

IIGHT

2-0,UPPIN FOR ONE MORE VOTE!

Easy battle for Tricksta, he just came with the better punches, and verse flowd 2x better... he lyrically raped Jemille, you didn't do so bd anyways Jemille, just elevate, peace, 1ne...

My vote=Tricksta

aight,its a KO,thanx for votin yall

pz