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Aight man
Rules:
No Feed
No D/R votes
No hate votes
I guess crew votes are aloud in this one since were in the same crew
10-12 lines
Drop verse one hour after checkin okay
Checkin above...........checkin below...........checkin this shit out!!!!!!!
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A'yo
Sylentz don’t speak that’s why he battles on the net
Your bout to get murked, like a newbie battling a vet
You winnin this battle would be a muthafuckin hate crime
Your rhymes are more stretched then santa clauses waist line
Ill drop you like a can of soda, just to pove that you shook
Sylentz is frustrated like the when he read a wheres waldo book
Voters say Stat won this and they didn’t even see what I got
You lost and you aint ‘riply’ so you better ‘believe it or not’
I won already, so why do I keep typin, this is just a waste of a line
Your like a belt with a clock on it, you’re just a ‘waist’ of my time
7-5 now but don’t give up the battles not finished you havnt lost yet
But how you gonna drop a verse when yo nuts havnt droped yet
G/L
Ayo Its Like This
Status Quo Couldnt Punch Me, If He Was A Magnet And I Was Metal
He Wouldnt Sting, Cos Ill Take It Outta Him Like A Leaf To A Nettle
Call You The Crucial Crow Because Your Needed Like A Whole In The Head
Your Rhymes And Concepts Are So Played, They ALready Past Dead
Ill Rip Your Rhymes, Spit Em Out And Shit On Each Of YOur Lines
Cos Soon Enough For Spittin Your Wack Verses There Gonna Be Fines
Coudlnt Think Of An Original Name, So You Took Statquo And Added 08
Ya On The Crew Roster For Riding Dicks, Cos Your Wack, Theres No Debate
From 303-aka D town, This Bitch Is A Clown, And By Everyone Hes Hated
StatQuos Biggest Challenge Is To Stay On The Beat................
But He Is fly Like The Sky...................
...............................................Fur thest Thing From The Street
vote=sylentz.. why u might ask, ok lemme tell you.. stat, u started off nice i thought u were gonna have a pretty solid verse.. then you did this
Voters say Stat won this and they didn’t even see what I got
You lost and you aint ‘riply’ so you better ‘believe it or not’
I won already, so why do I keep typin, this is just a waste of a line
Your like a belt with a clock on it, you’re just a ‘waist’ of my time
now everyone spits playd shit at one time or another, but these 2 punches here are SO playd from like 4 years ago its practically biting.. but we'll just call it playd, either way u lost maaaad points for that, u should know better.. sylentz was kool, some nice disses, no real hard punches.. but the fact he had originality is what gave him the edge.. decent closer too so, vote=sylentz
return an honest vote here plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167730
Sylentz recycled.... And stat played a lil...
Sylentz - last line is recycled, seen ya use it before but meh whatever.... You had some nice ideas, but didnt sport them right. Truthfully, I believe your verse was a good try, but just didnt come as hard as stat...
Statquo08 - Might of been played, but taken away Sylentz's verse as a penalty for the recycling (which is even worse) I'd say your punches hit harder. Both had creative ideas 'n' shit but I think your both stressing over this battle.
v/ - Statquo for hitting harder
No hate yall, your both my homies and this was a hard vote but Sylentz wanted it real bad... So here yall are...
Thanx for the honest feedback and votes................ill return the feedback for anyone who leaves decent feedback and honest votes............just drop a link!
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well it goes like this,
sylentzz, i liked your verse, flow and structure above than average, nice wordplay and some good lines, but this was the only one i really liked:
Call You The Crucial Crow Because Your Needed Like A Whole In The Head
Your Rhymes And Concepts Are So Played, They ALready Past Dead .
status, wordplay about average, flow and structure probly lower than sylentz but weird cos it seemed to roll better for me. As i haven't ever read the so called "so played" lines, i can't mark you down, plus for me you took with the last punch.
vote: status
Sylentz don’t speak that’s why he battles on the net
Your bout to get murked, like a newbie battling a vet
1st line ok....2nd was meh
You winnin this battle would be a muthafuckin hate crime
Your rhymes are more stretched then santa clauses waist line
played as fuck !......
Ill drop you like a can of soda, just to pove that you shook
Sylentz is frustrated like the when he read a wheres waldo book
ha ha...nice
Voters say Stat won this and they didn’t even see what I got
You lost and you aint ‘riply’ so you better ‘believe it or not’
nah........
I won already, so why do I keep typin, this is just a waste of a line
Your like a belt with a clock on it, you’re just a ‘waist’ of my time
aight wordplay...but your kickin the arse out of the "waist" lines
7-5 now but don’t give up the battles not finished you havnt lost yet
But how you gonna drop a verse when yo nuts havnt droped yet
played....
Status Quo Couldnt Punch Me, If He Was A Magnet And I Was Metal
He Wouldnt Sting, Cos Ill Take It Outta Him Like A Leaf To A Nettle
nah.......
Call You The Crucial Crow Because Your Needed Like A Whole In The Head
Your Rhymes And Concepts Are So Played, They ALready Past Dead
hmmmm....meh
Ill Rip Your Rhymes, Spit Em Out And Shit On Each Of YOur Lines
Cos Soon Enough For Spittin Your Wack Verses There Gonna Be Fines
dawg ! you can come harder than this...
Coudlnt Think Of An Original Name, So You Took Statquo And Added 08
Ya On The Crew Roster For Riding Dicks, Cos Your Wack, Theres No Debate
aight....
From 303-aka D town, This Bitch Is A Clown, And By Everyone Hes Hated
StatQuos Biggest Challenge Is To Stay On The Beat................
But He Is fly Like The Sky...................
...............................................Fur thest Thing From The Street
nice imagery and wordplay.....
verdict....my vote here goes to stat....he came wittier....and made me laugh more...sylentz....this is nowhere near your best deal man....you know you can drop better than this dawg....keep with the pace.......safe....hit the links....especially dayoungsta
Stat-your shit was good man..the wording of your lines were pretty well..your flow and structure was good..your punches and personals werent that bad..overall vocab was ok...not too bad...7/10
Sylentz-your shit started off bad i think..i think you ended better..your flow and structure was good..but you worded some of your lines bad..which threw off your personals and punches
v/stat
yo both yall had sum punches but Stat had harder hittin ones....
Stat-good structure..tight flow...good metaphors....hard punches
Sylent-good structure...aight flow....bad start.....hard punches but not as hard as Stat
v/Stat
can yall hit this up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167559