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8-1 isn't THAT bad of a record.
naw but 9-0 is better but 7-1 is not bad though still descent
Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You
Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt?
It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt
Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids
And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless
Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure
I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather
Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name
Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick
When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships
Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films
Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real
If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals
This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes
And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat
Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics
And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It
You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody
Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts
You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote
Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks
You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This
I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs
Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"
posting soon
things to know chicken=listen=case sentive
at battle time i don't even acknowledge
this child, just another wack textcee that
bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make
sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a
girl out the way i am eating a chick in/
i'll serve you with a break fast just like
dennies whore, your like 90 year old
models your not looking good anymore/
scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
text shit, you could be a runaway patient
and couldn't make a sick exit/ this battle
your losing it like going senile, you like
Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex
is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you
listen to text/ i'm not gay so quit trying 2
do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
herbed by a newbie/the only way you
getting head from a chick if you behead
her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
Hip hop better then you/I'll make u show ur
brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating
me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/
like a barber i take off the top, this herb
will get dropped, like weed dealers running
from the cops/ like a uterus I'll envelop ya
child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
develop a style/ you don't like women you
prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your
wedding dress and couldn't prevail/ you never
lead like a chaser you always follow, the only
reason you eat kids is because you swallow/
your not looking good like a whores health,
i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
your full of your self/
editing because of spelling mistakes peace
this was a close battle. imma go wit black flame. he had a little better word play and punch lines. but chicken ya verse was aiight too. holla.
vote:Black Flame
Ill battle.
Chicken...
The beginning was hot. Nice personals. Also, the personal about the battle with Liquid Flame was tight too. Ill multis throughout.
I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather
Ill wordplay. Ahhh!
When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships
Damn.
Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks
Nice.
Black Flame...
Nice verse. Some solid punches and good multis.
it's like i was eating a
girl out the way i am eating a chick in
Your best line.
like a uterus I'll envelop ya
child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
develop a style
This was nice too.
Vote: Chicken for an overall excellent verse with more hard hitting punches and personals.
Peace
your not looking good like a whores wealth
naw it should be *Health*
I Enjoyed readin This Battle..You Both Were pretty Even In Punches And Both Came Hard..This Was A hard battle To Decide A Winner..Chicken You Came pretty Nyce With Some Raw Punches..And A Okay Flow..Black Flame Your Shit Was Nyce Too..I Think You Came A Little Harder With The Punches Tho..Just A Tad Better..LMAO@The Line Talkin About How Chicken Got Herbed By A Newbie, That Was Me..I Didn't Kno Chicken Was Case Sensitive..Hah That Battle Was Old As Fuck..Anyways..You Had A Tight Flow..Off At Times But Tight..So Black Flame gets My Vote..It Was verry Hard To Decide..But I Read Both Verse's Again And I Think Black Flame Got This With Okay Personals And Dope Punches..Here Are Some Lines I Was Feelin..
Really Feelin This..It Hit Hard..Quote:
Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks - Chicken
I Liked That Line..Dopeness..Quote:
the only way you
getting head from a chick if you behead
her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
Hip hop better then you/ - Black Flame
I Would Go Into More Detail But Its Late And Im Tired As Fuck..
Vote - Black Flame
UP
B/C he came wit more punches, harder punches, and he was more original...eventho both yall had some played lines here and there
Listen
^thats been played and flipped so many timesQuote:
Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
^also really playedQuote:
I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs
besides your first & last couple of barz flowing well you really didnt have nothing to eye popping
black flame
^this was an highlightQuote:
scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
text shit, you could be a runaway patient
and couldn't make a sick exit
^another highlightQuote:
the only way you
getting head from a chick if you behead
her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
Hip hop better then you
LISTEN=CHICKEN
Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You
DECENT OPENER HERE,SETUP WAS COOL,PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME ALITTLE HARDER BUT GOOD
Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt?
It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt
PRETTY GOOD PERSONAL HERE,THOUGHT COULD OF BEEN HARDER,
Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids
And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless
NICE SHIT HERE,SETUP AND PUNCH GOOD,PUNCH WASNT REALLY HARD HITTING
Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure
I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather
I FELT THIS WAS FILLER HERE,SETUP WAS USELESS TO THE SECOND COUPLET FOR THE PUNCH
Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name
THIS WAS USED WELL I WAS FEELING THIS PERSONAL HERE
NICE PUNCH ALSO
Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick
When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships
NOT FEELING THIS ,FELT IT WASNT WORDED WELL AND PRETTY MUCH UNEFFECTIVE
Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films
AGAIN NOT TOO HARD HITTING BUT WAS COOL,I WAS FEELING THIS ,BUT PRETTY MUCH A PLAYED CONCEPT.
Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real
If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals
COOL,NOT REALLY FEELING THIS
This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes
And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat
LOL,THIS WAS COOL,MADE ME LAUGH ALITTLE ,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH BUT FUNNY
Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics
And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It
OK,REWORDED BETTER WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE
You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody
OK ,DECENT PERSONAL,NOT HARD THOUGH
Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts
You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote
NOT FEELING THIS
Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks
I THOUGHT SETUP WAS NICE BUT THIS COUPLET WAS UNEFFECTIVE CAUSE YOUR SECOND LINE WAS NOT HITTING HARD,FELT THE PUNCH WAS REALLY WEAK.
You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This
I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs
THIS WAS DECENT,I FELT IT,
Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"
COOL ENDING ,NOT PARTICULARLY HARD,BUT WAS COOL
BLACKFLAME
at battle time i don't even acknowledge
this child, just another wack textcee that
bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make
sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a
girl out the way i am eating a chick in/
THIS WAS PRETTY GOOD OPENER,WITH A GOOD PERSONAL IN THE SETUP AND A GOOD PUNCH FOR THE SECOND COUPLET
i'll serve you with a break fast just like
dennies whore, your like 90 year old
models your not looking good anymore/
scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
text shit, you could be a runaway patient
and couldn't make a sick exit/
THIS I WAS FEELING EXSPECIALLY THE SECOND COUPLET THE SICK EXIT PUNCH,THE SETUP WAS COOL,BUT THE PUNCH WAS NICE
this battle
your losing it like going senile, you like
Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex
is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you
listen to text/
SETUP WAS BLAH,PRETTY MUCH FILLER TO ME, THE SECOND LINE WAS COOL,BUT REALLY NOT A HARD HITTING PUNCH.
i'm not gay so quit trying 2
do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
herbed by a newbie/the only way you
getting head from a chick if you behead
her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
Hip hop better then you/
SETUP WAS OK,IF REWORDED WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE,I FELT THE KANGAROO PUNCH WAS NICE GOOD HARD HITTER
I'll make u show ur
brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating
me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/
like a barber i take off the top, this herb
will get dropped, like weed dealers running
from the cops/
THIS RIGHT HERE WAS OK,NOT REALLY FELLING ANYOF THE LINES
like a uterus I'll envelop ya
child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
develop a style/ you don't like women you
prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your
wedding dress and couldn't prevail/
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS EITHER,WEDDING DRESS SHIT WAS COOL,BUT PLAYED
you never
lead like a chaser you always follow, the only
reason you eat kids is because you swallow/
your not looking good like a whores health,
i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
your full of your self/
[b]UMM GOOD ENDING HERE,I LIKED THE LINE EAT KIDS IS BECAUSE YOU SWALLOW THAT WAS COOL, THE FULL OF YOUR SELF LINE WAS ALSO COOL,PRETTY GOOD SHIT
BOTH VERSES WERE VERY NICE,I FELT BLACK EDGED THIS CAUSE HE HAD MORE PUNCHES IN HIS VERSE,LISTEN I FELT CAME NICE,FLOW WAS REALLY WELL,NEEDED SOME MORE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE MAN,BUT IT WAS A NICE VERSE
VOTE BLACK FLAME
tha battle was hott, but black flame got it cuz he had hotter punches and a nice flo.
vote:blackflame
Iiight This was a really nice battle ..
i'll start wit chicken ..
"Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You"
Damn That was dope as Fuck .. haha it made me laugh ..
"Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name"
That was a nice personal .. Very dope
"Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films"
This was crayz .. It was prolly my favorite line of the match ..
"You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody"
Haha ..that was nice .. it made me laugh .. Nice wordplay ..
"Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"
That was an iight endin .. you could have made it better .. Dope Verse Chicken .. Much respect ..
Now on to Black Flame ~
"at battle time i don't even acknowledge
this child, just another wack textcee that
bites abolish's style/"
This was a nice personal .. Dope line .. and a nice start ..
"i'll serve you with a break fast just like
dennies whore, your like 90 year old
models your not looking good anymore/"
This was an iight line .. although i felt it was played as fuck .
"scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
text shit, you could be a runaway patient
and couldn't make a sick exit/"
OMG .. This line was dope as fuck .. DAmn . . i loved this one
"i'm not gay so quit trying 2
do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
herbed by a newbie/"
Um .. haha .. U.E. Beat Listen ? .. i peeped that battle .. Listen could have came much doper .. lmao ..
"your not looking good like a whores health,
i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
your full of your self/"
Kinda .. iight endin .. could have been better .. either way .. dope verse ..
Final Decision:
OK .. Chicken came dope as fuck .. i was feelin most of his lines .. he came really nice .. Black flame came nice .. but i didnt quote as much of his shit .. cause most of the end of the verse .. was gettin Really played .. Like there were all like "chicken couldnt" "Like" / .. Then the next line would be almost the same but just another played line .. i dunno .. i feel chicken came dope here and i was a great battle ..
MY VOTE- CHICKEN
-payce