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I heard about this kid named Soulja who goes both ways
This cat even rap's gay.. cause he's dropping an anal phrase
I'm setting you ablaze.. leavin you burnt the way you flaming for days
Soulja's verse is so played.. your rhymes are full of cliches
Leaving you laid - my punches reach out.. I'll beat you transcontinental
I'm a bust your mental.. cause your rhyme scheme is so elemental
You in loser's denial - you heard it first so don't touch the dial
Keep your mind intact.. Soulja lacks at spittin true facts
I'm a shake you like a heart attack.. got Soulja bringing up the back
And that's a fact - you couldn't win this if you pulled a night shift
So get this.. Soulja reaches for a dick before looking for chicks
Check it.. my shit is first rate the way my rhymes elevate
Mad cats try and emulate.. my style is so fucken great
When Soulja reads my verse he'll try and copy it
So be it - his shit is sure to miss.. and I got him wishing he did
Cause a verse against me is a death request, kid
I'm so ill my verses sell on Ebay for the highest bid
Soulja got more filler than a piece outta his mouth is
This kid will ghost faster than a black cat wearing a night cap
I stay strapped.. I'm here to bust bitches who post whack raps
Good luck.
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i got'cha had cpu problems
mine as well post up a corpse, either way youll 'drop dead
set flames to the spindle, but never spot a hot thread
im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track
equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts
1st senior ive ripped, you dont want me to get violent
go back and edit ya post blank bitch and write to remain silent
your rhymes suck so face it, as for elevation?
your risin bout as much as someone locked in the basement
This aint football, so get off my nuts and stop jockin my style,
dip my head in cemement, you still aint rockin me child,
i eat as many rhymes as my mouth will fit,
you deserve as many W's as in the alphabet,
the truth is your wack now cuz ya ghostwriter backed out,
ill leave ya bones fractured so their like ya mom, CRACKED OUT,
i guess your really like your mom cuz your a fuckin wack hoe,
youll have a chance at me when truth dot com promotes tobacco
aiyo rep i gotta log off right now so i cant vote on battle but i will asap
is that cool?
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^^^^^^A few were played but it came out better. I didn't post the rest cause after that it was pretty weak but that won it pretty much.Quote:
Originally posted by Soulja
mine as well post up a corpse, either way youll 'drop dead
set flames to the spindle, but never spot a hot thread
im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track
equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts
1st senior ive ripped, you dont want me to get violent
go back and edit ya post blank bitch and write to remain silent
your rhymes suck so face it, as for elevation?
your risin bout as much as someone locked in the basement
This aint football, so get off my nuts and stop jockin my style,
dip my head in cemement, you still aint rockin me child,
i eat as many rhymes as my mouth will fit,
you deserve as many W's as in the alphabet,
^^^^^^^Pretty much all metaphors but they weren't hittin' hard enough...they all came out aight but too weak to defeat the comp's verse, plus they seemed pretty force here and there.Quote:
Originally posted by Intrin Sic
I heard about this kid named Soulja who goes both ways
This cat even rap's gay.. cause he's dropping an anal phrase
I'm setting you ablaze.. leavin you burnt the way you flaming for days
Soulja's verse is so played.. your rhymes are full of cliches
Leaving you laid - my punches reach out.. I'll beat you transcontinental
I'm a bust your mental.. cause your rhyme scheme is so elemental
You in loser's denial - you heard it first so don't touch the dial
Keep your mind intact.. Soulja lacks at spittin true facts
I'm a shake you like a heart attack.. got Soulja bringing up the back
And that's a fact - you couldn't win this if you pulled a night shift
So get this.. Soulja reaches for a dick before looking for chicks
Check it.. my shit is first rate the way my rhymes elevate
Mad cats try and emulate.. my style is so fucken great
When Soulja reads my verse he'll try and copy it
So be it - his shit is sure to miss.. and I got him wishing he did
Cause a verse against me is a death request, kid
I'm so ill my verses sell on Ebay for the highest bid
Soulja got more filler than a piece outta his mouth is
This kid will ghost faster than a black cat wearing a night cap
I stay strapped.. I'm here to bust bitches who post wack raps
Vote=Soulja
for hittin' harder because his punches overpowered Intrin Sic's metaphors...
Can we get some votes?
ummmm..dis is what u call a average puny battle
none of u came hard..creativity wuz booty..
vocab mataphors and etc. wuz also sam-booty..
but i gotta go with soulja cuz int wasnt throwin direct punches like soulja..plus soul first5 lines woulda of beaten int whole verse..dats why
vote: soulja
Intrin Sic didnt really have a hard punch, his verse was elementary. flow was ok
Souja had ok puches plus his finish "youll have a chance at me when truth dot com promotes tobacco" was very good. word play ok
VOTE = Soulja
im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track
equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts
Soulja ripped him, alot more hotter punches, and betta flo.
vote:soulja
yo vote soulja .....
its the punches!!!
I thought soulja's punches hit harder than the other nicca's. Sic came coo though. Nice battle.
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