Get out my ear

same as Young J's song-Real Niggas

verse1:
Cant take a joke...then dont even post back
Close ya eyes..I neva smile your not funny..ur wack
Like Whammy you'll guess the answer to the question
Take my advice..and follow all of my lil suggestions
Dont talk back when spoken to unless i say to
Close ya mouth cause it's somethin ya supposed to do
Your just here as an extra... like Michael Duncan's wrist-band
You collect my sweat...than show it to your herb band
Next time i post..avoid it and just say he's better than me
Cause when you do..youll see it's all honesty

I'm feelin that, pimpn keep droppin

Short, but nice. The rhymes weren't bad but might wanna work on structure.
6/10