12 lines, 1 round, due in 30 minutes
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12 lines, 1 round, due in 30 minutes
12 lines to murder diss bitch,my 12 lions be released on diss shit
u after drama, is it the king o the jungle that yo after,run faster
cause ill blast ya as im movin right past ya,must be karma
me ima cunning linguist G,yo nada,gettin any,and G, dont mean yo fatha
ats what i thought,u battling me,well bring it,u gettin fought,
i knock u out of the earth,rap a motha fuckin astronought,
tilll yo bitches learn,ill displace all ya wak, n rap tumours
can taste on my flavour attacks,my favourite snacks,
from lil mill town,ill rip u to the max,but dont trip,just lean back
see my lions attack ,and ill rip yo from the front of yo skill to da black
invert this 16 yr ol, smash rappid hits,till he in need of a verse doctors analisis
u best off rappan in abstinance,cause u aint got shit..u n yo relatives.
My livin is bakin coke and shavin it well// and yo flows is comedy fam, u soundin' like the rap dave chappelle//
I roll past wit wit this rap shit, fly by like a nascar racer// rockin the blue and yellow diamonds like a indiana pacer//
spitin 2 hard dont get mad boy// i aint shyne// testin mines// i turn into a real bad boy//
u aint hot, u need 2 find somethin knew 2 do// u aint worth 12 lines so this my last bar, nigga i'm thru// wit u//
HOLLA!!!!!!!!!!!!
ayo fam dont be reppin the mill-town(Milwaukee) like that man. we hot around here u givin us a bad image!!! :cussing:
Only gutta niggaz rep this man. :cussing: :gfy:
not really a good battle
tjesus-had sum good lines and few punches not that good but not bad either nice job,keep elevating
jay-rell- wasnt good didint have punches you need to elevate seriuso man
v/tjesus
hit my battles up..in my sig
from australia milwaukee,u guys are always in trouble...
an we always bail u out.......peace.......
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^
p.s. f/yo image..
weak battle, but meh shit happens LOL
tjesus - came weak, you attemtped at punching him so I guess that counts, youve elevated some.. Try ficinf up your structure a lil more homie.
Jay Rell - your ass ducked me LOL.. Anyway you came wack as hell, next time spit 30 lines so I could maybe find a good two lines from you. Punches were self glorifying in come cases, you just suck. Word.
v/ - tjesus
get at this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171892
:cussing: it's milwaukee, Wisconsin, brew city playa',
my image is to say :gfy: cats like u cause u aint hot :thefinger
M16 dont know rap fam yo verse was worthless :laugh: :thefinger
I cant beleave ya'll votin 4 him over me LOL, my lines were hotter than his fuck them luv taps he gave me LOL!! :laugh:
It's cool though I can swallow a loss if it come 2 that!!! :laugh:
yo this was kinda weak no lie but i felt tjesus came a lil stronger
v/tjesus
oh MY GOD!!!!!!! :laugh:
I cant beleave it, this got me tripin
his punches were soft :laugh: my whole flow was :shoot: :shoot: hot!!!!!!!! :shoot: :shoot:
jay-rell killed this shit holla at ur mothafuckin boys jay-rell,vicpark ave tag team,we run this!!!!!!!!!!!
don't trip dawg....but yeah Jesus boy got you
he attempted at more punches...
his flow was aight
structure sucked....
but jsut came that much better then you dawg
tjesus - Nice flow going and a ton of multies, but no real punches. Punch your opponent to win battles. Luckily he didn't have any either here so it didn't really hurt you, but lay down hard disses for next time. Also, a lot of your shit didn't make sense and you wrote it for the sake of rhyming. Making sense is more important than forcing rhymes.
Jay-Rell - First off, you didn't have 12 lines....just cause you put a // doesn't mean it counts as a line. Besides, you should want more space, it helps you have more time to write disses. Work on throwing punches and not just about how you rock diamonds like indiana pacers. You lose this for having all self-glorification and no punches.
Vote - tjesus