Topical: key revolver vs. Ndustrial Minded

Topic: Crystal Clear
Line limit: 14-20 Lines
Check-in: Tonight
Due Date: Sometime before Wednesday.
Rules: No feeding, no biting, no crew/hate votes, the usual shit.

check.

Ndust . . . ?

check....my bad man hope you don't hol this gainst me
i ain't used to the Check in rule...never used it

This day and age...its all fucked an everythin's a blur
never know whats gonna happen...what'll occur
Terrorism is never left out in the States since 911...
when those bastards sent all those innocent people to heaven

Raisen heads an reavealin what was real an hidden
its almost like it was supposed to be...it was forbidden
Now the world is fucked...war everywhere you look
everythin has a hook...cause now people are shook

Crystal clear...we wish this was the world could be like
eliminated of fear...not worryin of a mislead air strike
People are dyin left right and center...its crazy
celebs are worried too...guards for Em...Dre... and Jay-Z

I wish we could get passed everythin an leave everythin behind
but i'm one...it'll take the voice of millions and all of them combined
I pray that for the next generation they'll become wise
learn from our mistakes...and then come ta conflict demise

aiite .. just postin to let you know im workin on it now. i just got home so give me a bit :]

Where am I? What is this world .. filled with all the hatred .. war seems endless
But why? We have all this fighting over which religion is better .. war seems senseless
Since when does religion tell you to bomb another country .. suicidal attacks
Or when does a country have a constant threat for 50 years .. peace is what we lack
Why can't the Jews be Jews and not be persisted by the Nazi race .. let them live ..
Why couldn't we let the Indians stay? Or treat african-amercians fairly .. we couldn't forgive
Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
You got terrorists .. like Saddam Hussein and Bin Laden .. our values in human race seem lost
Paper wrappers .. soda cans .. pollutes the earth we live on .. even the fumes from cars exhaust
Our disregards for the world .. for the people .. for the future of generations to come ..
Our disregards for the lives of people .. we end thousands of lives with the split of an atom
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Why can't people understand .. this world will never become blessed with peace again ..
Even when Jesus step foot on the Earth .. he was persucuted for his saying of 'Amen'
If our Earth was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more longing for the use of drugs
If our Earth was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more gangstas and street thugs
If our world .. that we lived on was Crystal Clear .. there would be no more pollution ..
No place can be perfect .. but to treat each other nicely ....
...and to respect your enviroment, other cultures, religions .. yes, I find Crystal Clear a solution

bah, nice drop ndust

get somevotes on this shit .. ill return the favor later.

This day and age...its all fucked an everythin's a blur
never know whats gonna happen...what'll occur

this first line was really deep dogg i Liked this ndust.....

Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
dude this stuff was tight too, but....

Imma give this to ndust because it is harder to come up with a good opener rather than a good filler...good job both on topic but he wins anyways!!!!!

v/ Ndust!!!!

aight thanks man....uppin this shit [1].....and key i liked your verse man shit was tight
this should be a good battle

NDust...Nice Punches Flows...nice evrything....
Key...u were pretty close with NDust
Using a colored bathroom and being black was a serious crime .. things were out of proportion
Now-at-days you have 14 year old girls banging .. get a child .. ending its life with an abortion
You got terrorists .. like Saddam Hussein and Bin Laden .. our values in human race seem lost
Paper wrappers .. soda cans .. pollutes the earth we live on .. even the fumes from cars exhaust
..liked those...they won it for u...


V/Key Revolver.....My Battles in sig return the favor..both of u

By the way i call nice lines punches.................................

Returning the favor. Vote! I return the favor. Pz.

Uppin for votes in this shit [2] leave a link.....

Uppn for votes. Leave a link .. Pz.