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trynna b good but...
Absurdum
Ya’ll don’t pledge allegiance… everyone’s for themselves
…like the worlds caught fever… Devils warped your brain-cells
Cash stays dirty money copped the murder fees
Catz got stung like they fucked wit birds N bees
Tried to cop a manslaughter plea in 3rd degree daylight
Robbery on the highway gangstas don’t play-fight
Hope we stay tight niggah never meet as enemies
Swear ill never feel jealousy no matter where you reach to
But if you slippin’ and a niggah gotta eat food!
Duck low cuz really i aint tryinna shoot people
In-fact i don’t know where my last gat got to
Some dudes live easier than others thats the roll of the dice
When hunger strikes starved mofukkaz do shyst
I should know i was hit like once or twice
It only takes 60 seconds to commit the crime
My peeps say i should be £20 million deep wit ma rhyme-
Schemes had me caught tossin’ pebbles to the dysfunctional
Granted me a spot in Belmarsh it wasn’t educational
Coz I already dreamed it, state of mind felt prison my third-eye seen shit
While society fiends for the blood of those supposed to destroy the community
I’m like damn! These cats was here b4 me
They approached me daily and crack simply surrounded me
I was broke so decided to cash in
Next thing im dressed in the latest fashion
Driving BMW’S, thinking one day ill cop an Aston
Fuck it! Now im trynna go str8 but in the workplace faced the sacking
Im chill tho i kno if i use my brain good shit can happen
Hope i make it for real do, if i don’t & we meet, u might wish i did too.
…Ya’ll don’t pledge allegiance… everyone’s for themselves
…like the worlds caught fever… Devils warped your brain-cells
str8 off da chisel
Holl@ ya nizzle
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That was good. Work on ya structure and I liked the little chorus thing ya did there. Ya flow seemed sketchy but structure can help. Kep workin on it. Ya spoke well.
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yeah thanx jigga was flowing ya know lika few minutes
