Ego-Maniacs

why are people so egotistical,think they're invincible
all about me is there principals, everybody else is invisible
i jus dont understand, its very hard to comprehend
talk themselves up a notch but its all pretend
dont wanna take help that others are offerin'
try n look too perfect like a congressman....
u try to give advice but think they're jus to wise
so u do advise but being smart is there biggest disguise
i tell 'em the limits the sky but being conceited doesnt apply
u need to relax but if u cannot comply, then dont even try
we can see ur self confident but rely too much on compliments
think ur right on everything so ur constantly in arguments
always tryin to criticize, always wanna victimize
but never realize that ur reps being brutalized
even though i scrutinize ur lil pathetic lives
i'd pull my head out my ass if i wanted to survive
cuz its different in the real world, whole 'nother situation
full of different stipulations,some causin deavstation
so check ur ego before u get to the door,which i would ignore
before ur social life gets hurt even more....


i hope i came across perfectly clear...because i see a lot of
ego maniacs out there and its gettin annoying, know wat i mean??
leave links n i'll return the favor....~one~


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167511
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148657

This was dope i really felt wat u was saying in the rhymes it was just some real shit and i respond to anything thats just from the heart.
The structure and vocab were fine the flow could be improved but the rawness in the rhymes made it dope to me.

Return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177850

thanks ......dont sleep on this one i wanna know wat everyone thinks.....be honest too i know i need to still improve so let me know where i need to elevate more.....

it iight.......it different then my shit....by the sound of it ...ur tellin a G not to Be a G....but that's all we got....i aint hatin .....thats the type of nigga you are.....i can tell ...your rhymes are educated......if you look at my rhyme aint at vocob in it.....its still love to a point,............jus returning the favour.......givin my 2 cents.......

ill vote on your shit......or what ever those links are 2...........return the favour..

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177721

^^ tellin a G not to be a G??? wtf r u talkin about, im talkin about all these big headed muthafuckers who think their the shit thats wat im talkin about... i mean confidence is one thing but there is a fine line to that.........come on why yall sleepin on my shit, did i offend everyone?? come on people let me know wats on ur mind about this piece....leave links i'll return the favor

y0 this was pretty g00d...i l0st a lil f0cus in tha middle s0 maybe i'll read it again....c0mm0n t0pic but u KINDA flipped it a little....i like that

this was pretty good i really liked the vocab and message. i wrote a piece just like this one but i liked yours more. you explained it in a way similar to how tupac would have done it. or at least i pictured it like that. very blunt message. good meter good rhyme scheme. nice multi's and just an overall good message. keep dropping man. you are doing it more real then most people could ever want to. pz

thanks for the feed.... djb we should do a collab sometime....lets get some more feed back