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It Is Like Tyson Versus Lewis, You're Putting Up A Lame Fight,
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?
Claim Tight? This Pussy Is Wide Open, Easy To Rip This Herb,
It's Obvious His Skill Is A Blank Expression Like His Signature.
Kick This Terd, You Can't Run The Track While At A Stand Still,
Drop Leprosy Punches The Way I'm Far Too Much To Hand Ill. (Handle)
Your Punches Are Just A Pure Landfill - Your Style Is Garbage,
Tekneik Is Marvel-Less When I Take Away His Childish Avatar!
Eye Is Parted, Stab Vision In Snooker, Make You Drop Eye-Cue, (IQ)
How Will You Teach Me When You Couldn't Finish High School?
Just Die Duke, Here Is Some Advice Bitch, "Die And Then Die!"
You Can't Even Elevate, Obvious We'll Never Meet Eye To Eye.
Die You Dyke, Fathered This Baby - Hence His Custom Status,
I Could Care Less - This Filler Will Beat You, Fucking Faggots!
You're Sucking Ass Shit, Believes In God So I Gun This Patriot,
Look At Our Locations, It's Obvious You're Far From Greatness.
aight I'll get mine up later today tomorrow or tha next day :D
Ya raps make a boozers sound, you entered tha wrong forum because your LL stands for tha loosers lounge/
Atheist you fag is that your ladies layed out gown?, both ways ya styles getting less recognition then a played out clown/
He spits a cold sellar type like freeze connection, spitting ill at him made him catch a yeast infection/
I win tha elite election, you thought I was spitting nasty and then you saw Atheists reflection/
Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/
Hold your horses like peeps having sex wit animals/
If your lyrics took on your personality I would be a cannibal/(eat your lyrics)
Aight thos lyrics came off my dome pretty much while I was listening to a bunch of beats, now lets get to it.
Talking bout ya wank and he sais he has a sub fire a torpedo and let his frankfurter sink/
Stab you wit my pen, and leave you wit murder inc/
This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand:eek: /
aiight here is my breakdown of this battle
Atheiest
weakest punch:"Your Punches Are Just A Pure Landfill - Your Style Is Garbage,
Tekneik Is Marvel-Less When I Take Away His Childish Avatar!".....did that even ryme?
strongest punch:"It Is Like Tyson Versus Lewis, You're Putting Up A Lame Fight,
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?"......nice punch/nice multi
his over all verse I give it a 7 out of 10...he could have come harder
Tekneik
weakest punch:"Hold your horses like peeps having sex wit animals/
If your lyrics took on your personality I would be a cannibal/(eat your lyrics)" ...it was weak becuz he had to explain it.IF we cant figure it out by ourselves..then just leave it out
strongest punch:"This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand "....made me laugh alittle bit to
his over all verse I gave it a 8 out of 10.giving him tha win.He just wanted it more
vote=Tekniek
This battle was nice although I thought Atheist could'ev come with some better punches.
But these bars I liked from Atheist:
And for Tek, he took this shit with his killer 6 bars:Quote:
It Is Like Tyson Versus Lewis, You're Putting Up A Lame Fight,
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?
It's Obvious His Skill Is A Blank Expression Like His Signature.
You Can't Even Elevate, Obvious We'll Never Meet Eye To Eye.
Got respect for both but Tek took this one...1Quote:
Ya raps make a boozers sound, you entered tha wrong forum because your LL stands for tha loosers lounge/
Atheist you fag is that your ladies layed out gown?, both ways ya styles getting less recognition then a played out clown/
Resuming on our wack inspection and it was him who got caught, poppin your pimples is tha only time your blowing up tha spot/
This kids like a rooster because he’s always claiming a cock, pissing yourself in jail is tha only time your flows on lock/
This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand /
Athiest had a few nice punches, but didn't throw enough. Looks like he could've came harder, but underestimated his opponent. Tek came wit an equal effectiveness, but threw more punches and was more consistent on his attaccs. He gets the vote.
both sides had a played verse in my mind with the punches strong with the flow and word play on both sides but the punches weren't that good my vote would be for atheist cause the vey first lines of tek's verse is bitten from kool moe dee the song let's go by him is a diss to ll cool j and the losers lounge is one of the things kool changes the l's in cool j's name too.
agree wit this ^Quote:
Originally posted by F-Money Bags
This battle was nice although I thought Atheist could'ev come with some better punches. Got respect for both but Tek took this one...1
both coulda come a bit harder but i'd give this to tek simply on his flow throughout the whole verse. and also this:
"Talking bout ya wank and he sais he has a sub fire a torpedo and let his frankfurter sink/
Stab you wit my pen, and leave you wit murder inc/
This kids ignored, you could introduce any artist and still not talk-to-tha-band/
He claims he’s been getting oral sex, but makes his girl talk-to-tha-hand "
^both of these bars will prolly end up high in repitwa's best 30 punches thread.
Fa real kid don't shit on me, your bringing up some Kool what ever and claiming I bit???? Suck my big dick faggotQuote:
Originally posted by DirtBoy69
both sides had a played verse in my mind with the punches strong with the flow and word play on both sides but the punches weren't that good my vote would be for atheist cause the vey first lines of tek's verse is bitten from kool moe dee the song let's go by him is a diss to ll cool j and the losers lounge is one of the things kool changes the l's in cool j's name too.
And if he's on this board, I signed up like in MArch and have started posting in July so I dun know who tha fuck your talking about
aight good battle both had good punches but Tek got it cuz he came harder, both flos were good too.
oh and atheist this line looks bitten
How Will You Beat Me When You Can't Spell Your Name Right?
i herd sumthin just like it in the fabolous diss by ali vegas
Hold your horses like peeps having sex wit animals/
If your lyrics took on your personality I would be a cannibal/
vote:tek
Aight I think its over now? 5-1?
Fuck it...