Mc Massacre (Comments Please)

Me and you will never see eye to eye you aint on my level//
Imma pitbull mixed with a tazmanian Devil//
A rebel that'll make love to ya moms and never hurt her//
while you in the back of the room left for later... for murder//
I drink Gatorade before spit so my rhymes come out with extra energy//
Consider yourself added to the list of my enemies//
ahead of me never//
Think of this as a homicide letter//
Now Imma decide how to design ya skin for leather//
I spit leathal like buggz gettin sprayed with raid//
You no good like a coucasian in the hood with braidz//
Mc's are endangered species the last of the dieing breed//
The worst of the beast out of a cage I've been freed//
To kill wannabies that wannabe Mc's//
U see The rap game's gonna need surgery for the way it been scared//
With homies like you that think they can rap thus far//
Now you might have won a battle but dont get flattered//
Cuz God sent me to make sure ya rhymes get splattered//
It'll be a miracle if after me you still intact//
Even Stevie Wonder can see that you wack//
Now that the point got across you can chill alright//
If you need me to ghost write it'll be a delight//
Ight This keystyle is over//
You can't beat me even with you battled me holding a 3 leafed clover//


Sincerly, Brainz



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nice, and fairly creative, yo. maybe i like it a little more complex, but that was pound, though.

Nice, and the stevie wonder bit was funny, keep it up like Viagara!

that was funny as fuck... but the content couldve been more complex and thought out..,. Keep it up tho revise it

haha yeh it was amusing i can picture some drunk cat freestyling that at a party or something maybe you need to work on your complexity and structure but it was ok i wouldn't exactly call it a massacre but then again neither was 50's album

tru tru it was amusing... lacked complexiety.. but overall it was hott

Good Lookin I'm Working On it
No doubt thanks (to all)

you didnt care what u said as long as it ryhmed huh.n-e ways keep writing and u will get beeter but this rap was a little on the whack side.

LoL Everyone has aright to an opinion Thanks