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Another from Double Duce
it's going all wild so many misconceptions/
like the world did wrong and God has no corrections/
that's why i stay on top with a team for protection/
it's either that or a 10 second dream with no way to leave the reflections/
that's why you gotta fight the battle/
dismember the body of anybody who seems to fight to tattle/
rip em and give em hard texture like they tried to fight the paddle/
so anything go wrong you know it's meant to be right/
i'm taking the leading role of reacting to the hard bite/
cause no matter what you do there's always somebody doing wrong/
you just show em right and show them the ways of a sympathetic song/
Just the things i learn from the street. not only do i learn bad things but good comes with it.
Let me get some feedback
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nice rhyme shceme...great bar placement......it just doesn't stand out as great as u could have propably made it
plz need feed back i got 3 well 2 one has been closed......y i do not understand
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umm the beginnin i was likin the the middle i was like ok NO...gotta keep me interested at all times but ur flow wasnt bad kinda long in the lines...overall good vocab usage...
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yo let me get some feedback
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