-
Behind the Music
Jae
SirusX
..
..
Enjoy
..
..
Lets start the show...
..
.
Inspirational, feeding fire from the heart,
A lyrical fuel, setting a pace right from the start,
Come inside this art; let it captivate your spirit,
Just spear it...don’t procrastinate when you hear it,
Just spill out some lyrics & bounce your head w/ rhythm,
While women’ll sway sexy, while others pronounce their wisdom,
I’m there for children, saving souls so they survive,
I’m a drug free drug, producing hits to get you high,
Deep down inside, you’ll feel a pulse begin to surface,
Which is a deadly weapon, setting rhythm in which to serve with,
Just get absurd kids, let me tingle up your spine,
Let me come inside, letting you mingle wit some rhymes,
Time after time, whatever your kind, I’m ready for friendships,
I’ll keep you wanting more like spaghetti and fish chips,
So set down the big clips, and study the motion,
Love me like potions, and I’ll be a buddy for nothin,
I’m missin something, left partially incomplete,
So here’s my homie to tell you what it is that I need,
Depending on who is tuned in, or out…
I might be instilling courage or doubt
Unveiling sermons as shouts over snares
Under bass,
& in-between the ears of those who don't care…
most stare into my eyes, out of curiosity
constantly stopping these hypocritical mockeries
of a lexis rhythm running around awkwardly
but still cunning w/ sounded out syllable intervals
perpetually declining into your memories
I'm fueled off the energy of the crowds
Stayin loud about to catch his breath I might pause
But my point aint across until I hear applause
Gods & Devils both find wisdom in what I preach
I reach out to teach about you… without you…
I am words bond.
I still fly w/ all the birds gone
I can be your third strike, before your first wrong
this verse strong, cuz this verse be me…
I am the ying… I am the poets genie…
& I will always be free…weather or not u want to believe me.
-
-
Well I dont know, I felt the verses didnt have much to do with each other, both had completely different aspects of the topic, but both did your things. Jae actually had some dope lines, and i was vibin, like I can imagine someone at a spoken word or at a party just sayin it. Sirus had some dope shit too, the ending was alright, but then you didnt need to surprise anyone at the ending so what can i say. You both did your thing.
-
^Word.
Thanks bro, but thats a good thing that come off as two completely different aspects, because we were...
This piece goes deeper than the cover...and it blends with the title.
Here's the hint... We are giving a voice, or emotion, if you will, to two things that make up music. We werent speaking as ourselves, so to speak.
-
-
Not bad, Pretty nice shit. You sorta came proper.
-
that was a good verse i was feelin it blood even though the verses were very contrasting i still understood wat u was tryin to do and i feel you delivered it well,
keep em comin bro!!! be sure 2 holla at this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182295
-
yo, there were two people not just one,
and thanks for the comments. ima peep your link one of these days.
-
This was good u two, in a comparison i think that Jay shined a lil bit more than Sirus, but both of u had ur share of good lines and both had there share of jus decent ones, overall I liked it, both ya did ya thing. But good job on the collab fellas. 1
-
Nice Piece the both of you. I was feelin Jae's verse more than Sirus. Jae's verse kept a tempo throughout Sirus' picked up towards the end i thought. Congrats Gentlemen
-
Good stuff man
i was not feeling some of it
but overall pretty damn good
props on that shit man
-
a solid enough concept and a well co-ordinated collab. but i think multi's would've helped the flow along a lot here, some stronger vocab would've helped as well. good to see a different than usual concept turn up in OM though so you get props for that.
keep posting, keep elavating. and if youcould rep one ofminei'd really appricaite it.
-
-
Throw ya hands in the air, and wave em like ya just dont care...
So drop a link and some feed, and we'll hit it up...oh yeaaaaaaaaa
