Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
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Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
no, lets make it like 16....i actually have better battles this week.
and wtf@ me battling him for this........you see that 1 L in his record? I put it there.
g'head and post im done and waiting on u....u can go either 16 or 20 like u wanted, but i wont drop first since u asked for the max.
20.
Yea...check it
Jae’s bout to rock ya, here’s a secret, yer guts all that prospers
& I’m not kidding, you’re The Future...dude gettin cut from the roster
So just stop nerd...
The keys sore & ya need more; I’m breakin this weak whore
Cause he thought he came stiff, but... ya just makin the keyboard
& now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
A throttled success? Nah, Deon’s lame in the game of the wealth
So you’re right... “People often ask who I am”
...B/c ya aint made a name for yaself
Plus, you say the same bit, but you still remain quick
Cause he’ll come with aim... jokes and other played shit
Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
And don’t worry uncles, this fag’s far from fucks,
The only niece on Deon’s...comes in a car or truck.
Faggot, don’t spar ya luck, fuck famous people, enough’s been said
I’ll leave you with rockstars...AND a halo above ya head
And hey, yo, he loves a wedge, a burger w/ carrots and things
So if you win the LW... you MIGHT be able to wear it as a ring
I swear this dudes a fling, the Real World, he’s lustin to hit
But...
When I’m throwin, I’m Landon...while your punches just Miz
Just gimme the belt.
To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
drops aint crack, this player should know
only time he'll pump on the block...will involve a neighboorhood ho
concepts all lack, yea you strivin whore
flips makin no splash...like jumpin from the kiddie divin board
you'll find'em sore, he'll be mad at me soon's he learn
that imma kick his ass so far
he'll need 'the guide to the galaxy' to return
yea you gon lose, but here's a tip for this wack kid
flip one of my lines...and you TOO can make the mag like Mac did
quit actin, good wins? explain how...
nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
and slidin the mods dough via paypal
bum,folks see deon, and thats how they peep the winner
but i'll put a slug in ya stomach...
and not the kind ya poor ass eats for dinner
whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much
you still on my crew huh? just cuz we better bitch
let go, cuz at the present...The Future's just somethin you'll never get
my progression trick? i leave niggas shook and succeed
i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league
Dunno, I was just feeling Jay's more. I didn't get any feel from Deon's verse, it was decent at best. Jay wasn't that much better, but he had some more witty lines and attempted with wordplay, which at least shows he tried more... and it reflects.
Vote: Jay Walker
& now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
^that's some hard shit right there homie, liked these...
vs
To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
quit actin, good wins? explain how...
nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
and slidin the mods dough via paypal
OK, here's the deal... both of you only had a couple quotables that hit hard, so you even there... the difference is in the fact that Deon flipped a couple concepts of me n' com, which is sad...
Me vs Born this season:
most of ya shit is wack, similar to what a nerd say
and those corny lines, is why Feeble gets shit for wordplay
Deon:
whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much
and...
Com vs Me last season
take me seriously, cuz you can't take me... seriously.
Deon
i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league
on top of that, Deon had a couple of weak relation type punches (the guide to the galaxy omfg gimme a break, and the 'slugs' one *smh*)
so, the belt should go to Jay dot
v/Jay
Jay def. shined on this..
Deon you my Future fam son, but Jay got this one..
i'll explain if i have to.
v/Jay.
word@ me flippin MORE lines from LLL heads....it'll keep happening cuz I dont read battles here.
i dont think the second punch spit put up was any kind of flipping. anyways
[JAY]
Jae’s bout to rock ya, here’s a secret, yer guts all that prospers
& I’m not kidding, you’re The Future...dude gettin cut from the roster
worded real bad, just read it without the dots. wtf[5]
So just stop nerd...
The keys sore & ya need more; I’m breakin this weak whore
Cause he thought he came stiff, but... ya just makin the keyboard
simple wordplay with no real flip to it.[5]
& now that D’s wore, I threw a sympathy party, started w/ text
I told him to show at this street number...and he modeled address
word, ive definately seen a dress wordplay a LOT lately, but this was cool[7]
A throttled success? Nah, Deon’s lame in the game of the wealth
So you’re right... “People often ask who I am”
...B/c ya aint made a name for yaself
never seen him say that, but okay.[6.5]
Plus, you say the same bit, but you still remain quick
Cause he’ll come with aim... jokes and other played shit
old, lame[4]
Damn, G, just save it, you’re outta shape, bearin extra large
So if you see D ‘n a Bowflex...I’m wearin camouflage
this was nice[7.5]
And don’t worry uncles, this fag’s far from fucks,
The only niece on Deon’s...comes in a car or truck.
what the fuck. good wordplay but NO DISS at all.[5.5]
Faggot, don’t spar ya luck, fuck famous people, enough’s been said
I’ll leave you with rockstars...AND a halo above ya head
this was aright, old concept[5.5]
And hey, yo, he loves a wedge, a burger w/ carrots and things
So if you win the LW... you MIGHT be able to wear it as a ring
didnt like it.[4.5]
I swear this dudes a fling, the Real World, he’s lustin to hit
But...
When I’m throwin, I’m Landon...while your punches just Miz
hah this was nice. you didnt really connect with the setup, just stuck it in there, but nice punch.[8]
[DEON]
To be real, just thank ya idols and stop
cuz if Spit wasnt dicking Jace, you woldnt even HAVE a title shot
aright ..[5.5]
drops aint crack, this player should know
only time he'll pump on the block...will involve a neighboorhood ho
aright ..[5.5]
concepts all lack, yea you strivin whore
flips makin no splash...like jumpin from the kiddie divin board
aright ... do something.[5.5]
you'll find'em sore, he'll be mad at me soon's he learn
that imma kick his ass so far
he'll need 'the guide to the galaxy' to return
hah, this was kinda corny, but cool[6.5]
yea you gon lose, but here's a tip for this wack kid
flip one of my lines...and you TOO can make the mag like Mac did
niice, feelin this.[7]
quit actin, good wins? explain how...
nigga's prolly thankin his lucky stars..
and slidin the mods dough via paypal
aright, coulda been worded better.[6]
bum,folks see deon, and thats how they peep the winner
but i'll put a slug in ya stomach...
and not the kind ya poor ass eats for dinner
that shtunk. old as balls yo[5]
whats funny is, i cant believe how bad this ho sucks
with those lines...i see why feeble stopped usin wordplay so much
aright ..[5.5]
you still on my crew huh? just cuz we better bitch
let go, cuz at the present...The Future's just somethin you'll never get
word,[6]
my progression trick? i leave niggas shook and succeed
i aint took this league seriously, yet you seriously get took in this league
shoulda said like, 'you seriously should get took from the league' or something. but okay[6.5]
aright, well this was super close. jay got a 58.5 and deon got a 59. so yeah, basically deon won for having a more consistantly aright verse. jay had a few dope punches and a few that were just too blah to handle. so yeah, aight battle.
v. deon
I am shocked at the remarks made about me, yet two kids that are supposidly 'dope' drop something of this nature. Jay had the better wording and was consistent, but his punches were horrible in getting the point across, some lines werent even a punch to me just a personal joke that rhymes, Deon had horrible structure and alot of concepts that have been done before, really nothing worth quoting or anything i thought should of been since thinking this would be a high caliber battle. I'm ashamed yet antisipating my belt shot. vote Jay Walker
who said i was dope
theeeeeeey lied to ya-Juvi
Im an above average nigga......u better ask the right people next time
lol......congrats Jay....I will step it up.....sike.....playoffs i'll do better tho.
word thx. also, thx for whoever called me dope.
yo that was wack alll yoh wack and ill battle anyone here and rip um