Zonin

ZONIN
I’m the most vicious , I dethrone bitches faster than you can throw switches /
still known as one of the most sickest, I'll uphold the witness if the judge misses (oh!) /
You're in no position to openly hold these visions /
I'll show you a pose that got you froze like motion sickness /
I’ll Unload a clip through ya whole division and dispose of my victims, my smithens spoke with a quick tick tick and a hiss /
I won't miss, I’m on the road to riches, I lay on a cold shoulder with my pockets bulging /
heat up the spot, I speak through a box, even when I speak at my weakest degree its the least you got in stock /
my regime is to be seen, intervene between the highest degree like a beam triggered above ya spleen /
I can deplete feigns In teams, I intrigue you to speak of my demean, but only in ya dreams can I be seen /
I’m serene to scenes when I breeze, though I’m foreseen as misdeemed to emcee's /
My defiance strike's violence through science at these hip hop icons, but I don't rely on my alliance to contrive my primeness /
P shines to blind ya minds iris and the theory I define lye’s between the lines I rhyme in /
these envisions couldn't begin to contradict the sickness I’m spitten as long as the earths spinnin /
Many have risen from competition, other's who tried have died witnessing these incisions /
The conflictions I impact on cause strong infliction so it'd be smart to keep distance /
My long arm division's barred from derision in frivolous dispositions /
Though I hold my highest regards to those in prison, Imposed by their own decisions /



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I liked you rhymes,but I wasn't really feelin the flow,some nice punches in there too,but next time please post in a bigger font and please stay with the original color,makes it alot easier to read.

It was good. The rhymes were creative but make the font bigger please and fix the structure better. I liked how you used more rhymes in the middle of sentences but some words i didnt know what they meant. Goodjob but damn please make it easier to read.

Pretty nice lines.....But you seriously need to fix your structure dude.....Your current structure just is run on sentences, and i think you should make a better one.....Make them line up..

Keep elevating.