10 lines
due by midnight.
house rules.
Good luck both yall.
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10 lines
due by midnight.
house rules.
Good luck both yall.
good shyt DAM be4 midnight make it like be4 11:00 PM im in MIAMI
check.....u spit first than i'll follow
g'luck.
w.e. ite here it goes
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Im strate sick wit my shit and im showin u loud and clear
My rhymes will infect u like no alchohol on a freshly pierced ear//
Im the King james of dis bitch but im not a cavalier
Im lyrically doin big things, niggas call me a shakespeare//
My rhymes decide yo life like u was on death row
Im havin u in debt for life missin yo bois in fresno//
You an ameature, and ima fuckin pro
You suck, u probably havnt smelt the scent of a real studio//
Mentally and Lyrically yo image is disolocated
Battlin me will leave u like yo avy, frustrated//
this herb is in miami and he still cant bring the heat
it's like "hugging a loss" how he -clings to deafeat-
he came in my sight ,than waved to death and said goodbye to life
you couldn't -kill a crab- if it laid on its back and gave u the knife!
it dont get more gangsta than three oh five...ok so i lied
u couldn't throw b's up if u were anorexic and swallowed a hive
only god could judge you, so i'll send you to heaven
pistol will dot your head like workers from 7-eleven
i'm reading this princess' diarie like he was mandy moore
abs with eat through your bars quicker than fat kids at the candy store!
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all personals have to do with his sig....location...and avatar
uppin for votes.................................thanks
nice,,,, we need votes son,,,,,, holla baq da heat are 2-2
this herb is in miami and he still cant bring the heat
it's like "hugging a loss" how he -clings to deafeat-
Good opener here, decent meta and personal with the Miami.
he came in my sight ,than waved to death and said goodbye to life
you couldn't -kill a crab- if it laid on its back and gave u the knife!
Decent punch here, played off his sig nicely wit a meta
it dont get more gangsta than three oh five...ok so i lied
u couldn't throw b's up if u were anorexic and swallowed a hive
Nice more metaphor here, punch isnt hard as previous but ok
only god could judge you, so i'll send you to heaven
pistol will dot your head like workers from 7-eleven
Not really dissing him, get the concept but this seems rushed
i'm reading this princess' diarie like he was mandy moore
abs with eat through your bars quicker than fat kids at the candy store
Ok closer, but Mandy Moore wasnt in the princess diaries. lol woulda been better if she was. Bottom lines been done before careful not to used played stuff like that.
VS>
Im strate sick wit my shit and im showin u loud and clear
My rhymes will infect u like no alchohol on a freshly pierced ear//
ok idea, but theres no punch this is self-glory, dont do that
Im the King james of dis bitch but im not a cavalier
Im lyrically doin big things, niggas call me a shakespeare//
Still no punches
My rhymes decide yo life like u was on death row
Im havin u in debt for life missin yo bois in fresno//
Not very good.
You an ameature, and ima fuckin pro
You suck, u probably havnt smelt the scent of a real studio//
Finally a punch, but isnt very creative or witty, just a general statement
Mentally and Lyrically yo image is disolocated
Battlin me will leave u like yo avy, frustrated//
Nah, closer is weak tried to use vocab but it was forced.
Abs won this battle, he had punches. Tru anyone can rhyme words, but to win battles your verse has to have punches n disses aimed at your opponent not so much bragging about yourself.
w.e. ite here it goes
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Im strate sick wit my shit and im showin u loud and clear
My rhymes will infect u like no alchohol on a freshly pierced ear//
Not deep
Im the King james of dis bitch but im not a cavalier
Im lyrically doin big things, niggas call me a shakespeare//
NO
My rhymes decide yo life like u was on death row
Im havin u in debt for life missin yo bois in fresno//
good wordplay,bad punch
You an ameature, and ima fuckin pro
You suck, u probably havnt smelt the scent of a real studio//
No
Mentally and Lyrically yo image is disolocated
Battlin me will leave u like yo avy, frustrated//
not a good ender
4/10
this herb is in miami and he still cant bring the heat
it's like "hugging a loss" how he -clings to deafeat-
Played in 02'
he came in my sight ,than waved to death and said goodbye to life
you couldn't -kill a crab- if it laid on its back and gave u the knife!
eh
it dont get more gangsta than three oh five...ok so i lied
u couldn't throw b's up if u were anorexic and swallowed a hive
Nice
only god could judge you, so i'll send you to heaven
pistol will dot your head like workers from 7-eleven
eh
i'm reading this princess' diarie like he was mandy moore
abs with eat through your bars quicker than fat kids at the candy store!
ok..but played
6/10
vote...abstact
both of you need some elevation, trying coming up with new punches
RTF at SAC \v/ AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
thanks uppin............................................. ..
uppin please vote, i will return the favor as soon as i get my posts up
wow at you stealing my name kid
i had this name for a while get over it, i mean it's not gonna mess up you rep so dont worry about it.....
anyway votes uppin