One Love

verse 1:

you know i love you alot wit ya funky ass style
i love you more than ever since we had are forst child
my love for you is deep...like the blood in my veins
i love you alway's and will alway's stay the same
and my love remains..even if your away..never gon change
never losin faith,never let a passin day come between get away
oh darlin darlin i just wanna let you both know
that'll do anything and that i love you both so...
feel the power when our hearts choose to combine
the power is strong...the power is yours the power is mine
when our hearts part you know the sky must cry
keep on on lovein ya both,writing letters til my pen runs dry
if you stay, good love will remain to fix me up right
if you go, rise and fall...rain pour my pain...watch the skies cry
you who i miss when im not holdin ya real tight
i love you both in this world til the day that i die

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

some one stole my heart, 911 this an emergency
please help me find my loved ones...thanks for your courtesy
people all around world, have never heard of me
oh god come upon and bless my family with authority
i got the love in my heart...git the vibe in my soul
my love for both my babies no one aelse can control
my loves like a star for you ima shine so bright
i love you both to death want ya balways by my side
dont know where i'd be if u weren't here
me losin you both.....is the most that i fear
no one else in the world can hold ya both down like me
i madethis song for us cus....i really felt the urgency
to alway's put you first along with makaela marie
i love you both and i know you both love me...baby...

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

***makaela marie is my daughters name
***my girlfriend ive been with since 8th grade now im a junior
***we had a first child but we had a miscarriage it was gon be a boy so we had a nme for him...MAKAE.....so in honr of him when we had a girl we added a lil more so it would be more of a girl name but also have her brothers name..MAKAELA

ok heres a better look at it cuz shit its out of proportion here....

verse 1:

you know i love you alot wit ya funky ass style
i love you more than ever since we had are forst child
my love for you is deep...like the blood in my veins
i love you alway's and will alway's stay the same
and my love remains..even if your away..never gon change
never losin faith,never let a passin day come between get away
oh darlin darlin i just wanna let you both know
that'll do anything and that i love you both so...
feel the power when our hearts choose to combine
the power is strong...the power is yours the power is mine
when our hearts part you know the sky must cry
keep on on lovein ya both,writing letters til my pen runs dry
if you stay, good love will remain to fix me up right
if you go, rise and fall...rain pour my pain...watch the skies cry
you who i miss when im not holdin ya real tight
i love you both in this world til the day that i die

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

some one stole my heart, 911 this an emergency
please help me find my loved ones...thanks for your courtesy
people all around world, have never heard of me
oh god come upon and bless my family with authority
i got the love in my heart...git the vibe in my soul
my love for both my babies no one aelse can control
my loves like a star for you ima shine so bright
i love you both to death want ya balways by my side
dont know where i'd be if u weren't here
me losin you both.....is the most that i fear
no one else in the world can hold ya both down like me
i madethis song for us cus....i really felt the urgency
to alway's put you first along with makaela marie
i love you both and i know you both love me...baby...

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

***makaela marie is my daughters name
***my girlfriend ive been with since 8th grade now im a junior
***we had a first child but we had a miscarriage it was gon be a boy so we had a nme for him...MAKAE.....so in honr of him when we had a girl we added a lil more so it would be more of a girl name but also have her brothers name..MAKAELA

it sucks havin kids that young....my girls due in december with our first baby...hes a boy...but shit im 20(well 20 in 2 weeks)and shes 21 in january...so were not tha young....anyway...your piece was a little simple and tha topic was kinda played..but you get mad points for emotion and imagery in my book...keep droppin and elevatin...and g/l with your Babies..~1~

yea homie will do man and yo spread the word man cuz peeps dont seem to see me

this was cute ta me...
seems lik u are verys erious about ya gurl and all...
structure was nice, topic was very sweet n lovin ta me
and its good ta kno somebody cares about their gurl cuz most niggaz i fucked wit was neva lik dat, he wasnt there 4 my baby! but good job
good wordplae in this piece too my nig

it was good i like the scheme and stlye

I was really feelin diz piece. Nice emotion, imagery, n structure. Nice flow 2. Keep em comin. 1

ayo peeps man WERD come on and holla at this OM man its str8 yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good Shit Man For Reals The Whole Emotion Came Really Good Imagery Was Cool. Vocabulary Was Decent Keep This Up Man Weeerdness.

-Moral

That was deep

yo man WERDS keep in it REAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!