-Untouchable- Vs Plain-Thug(250 posts to vote)

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Nothin original from this cat, just a plain old thug
N' dont think Ur cute cuz bitches point n' smile, they just laughin at Ur mug
Profile's full of periods chick, so its obvious Ur hobby is leakin blood from Ur clit
N' U probably think I stink, but im lettin U know Ur just smellin Ur lip
Fuckin herb, Ur prolly illiterate so imma let U know this losin U doins a verb
Told this biter the concrete's full of good spit...so he bit the curb
Fuck this joke, U couldnt spit dope if U spat up coke
Nigga gots mad dickryders, he could create voting rings just by blowin smoke
Redneck dont know hip hop facts, U thought Nascar dropped dope tracks
I mean, fuck, this nigga couldn't run shit if he overdosed on ex-lax

I could battle you wit played rhymes...........But i still wouldnt copy you
He read da tutorials more than once.....But he still wouldnt know what to to
He says he cant be murked.....Only when dis kid's facin noobs n wanna b's
But when a vet comes and challenges....He goes offline cuz he aint worthy
You beatin me is like if da president actually called back da damn troops
He wins by d/r's....They rap around his "spoon",as if they were "froot loops"
Ma rhymes'll lyrically traumatize you......They'll have you left retarted
You couldnt throw anything at me.....Even gas out ya ass after you farted
Dis guy's probabaly da real virgin...Dont believe me read his damn name(untouchble)
Says fawn one....But he's probabaly got more action than you,or da "game"
You'll git more attention from gay men like shout-outs and booty-balls
You aint good at rappin....So just keep tryin like jordan was in baseball

I could battle you wit played rhymes...........But i still wouldnt copy you
He read da tutorials more than once...But he still wouldnt know what to do
He says he cant be murked.....Only when dis kid's facin noobs n wanna b's
But when a vet comes and challenges....He goes offline cuz he aint worthy
You beatin me is like if da president actually called back da damn troops
He wins by d/r's....They rap around his "spoon",as if they were "froot loops"
Ma rhymes'll lyrically traumatize you......They'll have you left retarted
You couldnt throw anything at me.....Even gas out ya ass after you farted
Dis guy's probabaly da real virgin...Dont believe me read his damn name
Says fawn one....But he's probabaly got more action than you,or da "game"
You'll git more attention from gay men like shout-outs and booty-balls
You aint good at rappin....So just keep tryin like jordan was in baseball

Made a mistake..............

Spoon-dick
Froot loops-condum
And uppin......................

Uppin.............................................

Uppin.........And i made a mistake it's calls not ballls..................

battle wasn't hard at all. both were pretty even. stretched flow, inconsistent with punches and wavy structure. the bottom line that gave this battle away was the punches, neither of which came with anything hard. but i compared things like, not understanding after tutorials against laughin at your mug, this battle was straight soft. plain made an attempt to induce wordplay, but that was what got him, it was just a little bit more connection of hits that he had in his verse. close one though to be honest.

Untouchable:
Nothin original from this cat, just a plain old thug
N' dont think Ur cute cuz bitches point n' smile, they just laughin at Ur mug
nah
Profile's full of periods chick, so its obvious Ur hobby is leakin blood from Ur clit
N' U probably think I stink, but im lettin U know Ur just smellin Ur lip
nah forced first line
Fuckin herb, Ur prolly illiterate so imma let U know this losin U doins a verb
Told this biter the concrete's full of good spit...so he bit the curb
ok
Fuck this joke, U couldnt spit dope if U spat up coke
Nigga gots mad dickryders, he could create voting rings just by blowin smoke
no
Redneck dont know hip hop facts, U thought Nascar dropped dope tracks
I mean, fuck, this nigga couldn't run shit if he overdosed on ex-lax
nah

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Plainthug
I could battle you wit played rhymes...........But i still wouldnt copy you
He read da tutorials more than once...But he still wouldnt know what to do
no
He says he cant be murked.....Only when dis kid's facin noobs n wanna b's
But when a vet comes and challenges....He goes offline cuz he aint worthy
nyeah statement
You beatin me is like if da president actually called back da damn troops
He wins by d/r's....They rap around his "spoon",as if they were "froot loops"
nyeah ok but forced
Ma rhymes'll lyrically traumatize you......They'll have you left retarted
You couldnt throw anything at me.....Even gas out ya ass after you farted
ok
Dis guy's probabaly da real virgin...Dont believe me read his damn name
Says fawn one....But he's probabaly got more action than you,or da "game"
no
You'll git more attention from gay men like shout-outs and booty-balls
You aint good at rappin....So just keep tryin like jordan was in baseball
nyeah

couldn't see much punches in both verses. but untouchable sounded like he forced a lot of lines to me. plain thug came with a lot of nyeah lines. improve on your personals and humour. but overall i'm gonna go with plain thug since he kinda went smoother in his flow. so good here

v/ plain thug

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Untouchable:
Nothin original from this cat, just a plain old thug
N' dont think Ur cute cuz bitches point n' smile, they just laughin at Ur mug
no
Profile's full of periods chick, so its obvious Ur hobby is leakin blood from Ur clit
N' U probably think I stink, but im lettin U know Ur just smellin Ur lip
no
Fuckin herb, Ur prolly illiterate so imma let U know this losin U doins a verb
Told this biter the concrete's full of good spit...so he bit the curb
ok
Fuck this joke, U couldnt spit dope if U spat up coke
Nigga gots mad dickryders, he could create voting rings just by blowin smoke
ummm no
Redneck dont know hip hop facts, U thought Nascar dropped dope tracks
I mean, fuck, this nigga couldn't run shit if he overdosed on ex-lax
no

structure was ok.....your lines were a lil too stretched, punches were barley there and if they were.....not direct, vocabulary was a bit lacked on this verse, flow was there but not the best. Overall the verse was aight.

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Plainthug
I could battle you wit played rhymes...........But i still wouldnt copy you
He read da tutorials more than once...But he still wouldnt know what to do
ok
He says he cant be murked.....Only when dis kid's facin noobs n wanna b's
But when a vet comes and challenges....He goes offline cuz he aint worthy
the concept was there but didnt hit.
You beatin me is like if da president actually called back da damn troops
He wins by d/r's....They rap around his "spoon",as if they were "froot loops"
alright
Ma rhymes'll lyrically traumatize you......They'll have you left retarted
You couldnt throw anything at me.....Even gas out ya ass after you farted
alright
Dis guy's probabaly da real virgin...Dont believe me read his damn name
Says fawn one....But he's probabaly got more action than you,or da "game"
no didn't hit
You'll git more attention from gay men like shout-outs and booty-balls
You aint good at rappin....So just keep tryin like jordan was in baseball
decent

Plain-thug I felt your punches hit harder and i liked your closer, your flow was decent as well as structure, vocab could also step up a level but it was overall a decent verse.i felt your punches hit harder.

vote - plain-thug

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You'll git more attention from gay men like shout-outs and booty-balls
You aint good at rappin....So just keep tryin like jordan was in baseball

plain def. had the better punches. untouch tried punches that didnt hit. came really weak. plain ur closer was funny, ur flow n structure was decent. untouch u had wack flow. both of yuo gotta stepup on copmexity n vocab. but overall plain got it

v/plain

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