My Dream

I had a dream last night let me share what i saw
voilence, and drama in the streets was no more
It was someting about this dream that made me feel right
It was like darkness getting covered wit some light
I took a closer look man what a beautiful sight
Something I thought couldnt happen I seen it come true
In this world people were love by many and hated by few
People who didnt know eachother had a close bond
every men, women, and children were getting along
Every nation in the world was together as one
there was no rich or poor everyone was the same
so i couldnt help but give this wonderful world a name
the name of this world was Eautopia
everytime u was in need people was there to help ya
i thought to my self was this the home of our wonderful savior
but it couldnt be heaven cause there were no angels
I realize in this dream life was no longer a struggle
I looked at this world and in my thought I said finally
but then i woke up and realize the dream i had was nothing but a fantasy

what ya thought i need feed backs

in all honesty i really wasn't feelin this im not hate'n or anything but its just not something i dont think will be appealing to many people, it didn't have much feelin or imagry in it, it was basically just sentences that rhymed well i dont have much to say so ya kno just try harder and you'll do betta in the futcha

good looks on that feed back i will try harder, im trying to ork on a new style but good looks though homey.

i was feeling it i thought it was good keep it up