I Got Barz

I'm nice wit my hands, but if I let the blam blam hit you thou/
I'ma put the flame to ya head like Bam Bam Bigelow/
got the sickest flow dog, please I'm messy/
and I keep a bird on the block like Lisa Leslie/
I'm the truth and I ain't heard the best in a while/
I'm great and cater to weight like Destiny Child/
Tone the shit you just shit niggaz can tell the difference/
I just spit a clip you hit wit a shell you bitchin/
Its more to it when I rob, ion't just take cash/
call it a penalty, drag you 5 yards by ya face mask/
then bang ya ass, I'll let 3 of em spit/
they hit hard knock you big yards like an illegal hit/
(pay attention)
I'm not gangsta but put the gun to sporty thugs/
50 cent piece holes thats what the 40 does/
clip in throw on snub if you on 40 40 dubs/
hop in ya whip and you tossed on the rug of the 40 40 club/
smoke the 40 40 bud, big rocks sell 40 40 drugs/
Henny nah 2 MD's now I'm 40 40 drunk/
you and ya boy more than struck,40 in the clip plus more in the pump/
thats 2 many shots now you and ya boy in the trunk/
now you and ya boy wit ducks when I red beam up ya liver/
that means you in a pond leave a red stream up the river/
this me I love my flow don't gotta spit it the best/
cuz the niggaz who was both got hit in the chest/
man I got sumtin to live for but nothin to prove/
you got sumtin on ya wrist dog thats sumtin to lose/
I got niggaz that'll dump wit the ooze/
should of tucked ya jewels, now you layin there nothin can move/
man I'm the dude yall niggaz bitch made/
and why you workin out I'll sit ya bird chest in ya rib cage/
wit a big gage, about two shots'll smash you/
and have five o on my back like fifty cent tattoo/

man that was easy nah mean sumtin light

i like the verse man it had good flow and nice multis but i didnt like how you used all those diffrent types of 40 man and the sturcture wasnt to good but other than that man nice verse so work on those and work on your imagery 6/10 nice job keep elevating

ehh try being more creative man, I swear all those lines are played, lol.. just try being witty and different cause pretty much everything thats simple has been done before, and yea I seen all these concepts before. no joke and no hate. so keep doing you just be more creative man. pz. and some of this ish didnt make sense at time..lol, but yea try to be more wittier.

^^ i agree ... try something a lil different cuz this wasnt a drop that shows u got skills, u jus mentioned everything thats on tv right now... i mean i would like to hear this on a audio it might sound alright even tho its more of a commerical feel to it... but u did throw mutlis, nothin that really stood out, u should work on the imagery... i did like ur metaphors tho... but overall i would say this was an average drop... jus keep droppin and drop something thats more of u then more of the majority of gangsta rap.... no hate, return the favor on my piece : http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233270