Cock The Shottie

Cock the Shottie

Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.

Everybody wana go cappin, but when it comes down to it they was just yappin
Full of shit always cuz they didnt like the clappin
Runnin away when they hear the poppin
Gettin scared cuz niggas be droppin
Lookin Shady when we be robbin
They be puffin blunts on the corner stead of clockin
So motherfuckers why are they breathin.
They lookin scared when they see the Po Po, cuz now they sayin no no.
They see blood on thier fingers, they like oh no,
See a Tear roll down his face, oh hell no.

Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.
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Well thas all i got for now..writers block :\

Shits kid of simple..get more into it and i think you would be pretty good, you know..keep elevating good luck

uppin

I'm pretty confident in saying, you dont even own a shotgun... or do ANYTHING you talked about...

Thats why people arent responding. No one wants to read bullshit. Write something real and original, and the piece will come alot easier, and attract more attention. Cause, honestly, this was wack dog.

ouch

who wants to battle

wdf is this BS

" cock the shottie and the shottie said"

wdf , your intellect is just like not there,
how old are you ? wow your ignorant.
where are you from? just curious.

don't ever drop another O.M again,
sorry to be harsh but bs like this should
not be here.

retire-

lmao @ cock the shottie"

go jump

well...shottie symbolizes many things... it can be any thing..just means u gota step up.
Next, don't jump to assumptions when u dont know shit about me...Whatever i write is real. And i dont care if u dont believe me...fuck, i dont have to prove shit to. Motherfucker ur beneath me.

You probably cant even say what the legal age is to own a shotgun without looking it up. STFU saying this shit is real with you. You're full of shit, and I'm not saying this to really offend you, cause I dont give a fuck about you, to care if you're offended or not. I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism so you can get better. Think of something deeper, and then just write your feelings about the topic into bars, then blend it together. You'll get better doing that, then writing some BS OM where every word holds absolutely no meaning.

Might hold no meaning to you, but if u werent selfless, u would understand to some it holds plenty.

This is the last time I try to help you out... ok, yea, to some people...alot of people actually, it might hold some meaning. But dude, that material has been done in so many ways, it says nothing about an indivual. you need to be your own person and write shit that happens in your real life, or real emotions... things like this. not some played out, wack shit, with an incredibly lame rhyme scheme. Now STFU, and just go practice... you'll get better that way.

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Originally Posted by Kigga

Cock the Shottie

Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Shoot these motherfuckers in the head
Cock the shottie and the shottie said
Bring it to these Fake G's right in the head, come on.

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That's enough to tell me that you lack everything.
Please stop talking and take advice. Right something
with meaing man. when you write a piece like this
the reader will think oh wow this dude is a moron ,
or a wanna be thug with no type of intelligence and
has a mind filled with violence and no sense of direction
in life. As well as a low education. Like one of those
worthless fools who believe everything
can be solved by pulling the trigger. And thinking it's cool.

That's how you come off as by writing a piece
like this.

enough of advice hopefully in the future these
words will sink into your head. Don't be ignorant and
stubborn.

Dude, you owe me 50% of my train of thought back..............this shit was horrible, i didnt even get through all of this drop and my head hurt...This was simple, no thought took place, i wouldnt be surprised if you wrote this in 5 minutes.