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im lookin for grace at a wonderful pace/
i could claim i was hustlin on da block, but dat aint da case/
actually i found god, jus like mace/
lookin for salace while in dis dark place/
findin a relationship, buildin a strong base/
searchin for a woman to stand by me and embrace/
i g2g go niggas, that was jus a quick spit, please leave crticizem or complements
this had no purpose
your flow was way off and next time dont just drop quick shit dropo a real verse with a purpose and a good flow
*bullshit*
look man u dont gotta be so harsh, i hadnt read da rules of da board yet(atleast 16 lines) i jus wanted to spit. imma bring it next time.
yo it was ok but it was to short and had no reason yo what did u want to say in the song
This piece, Wow this piece.. needs to be longer, needs complexity, needs better vocab. and needs some kind of deep thought put into it. nuff said
work on this..
straight up what white said yo
ya yo listen...lemme inform u...don quick spit anywhere on this site, unless its in bitch slapped to call sum1 out other than that...this is where u start out to get known...pretty much writtins and work that is something worth getting commented on... but overall that wasn't a bad flow but ure wordplay was a lil too basic
shit, you came here to say what you go to say.
and you said it.
i got your point.
short, but straight.
shits hot. mad props son...
ima make sumfin like that...
ima put link in my sig, comment it if you wish.
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16 line minimum.