Gunz Go Off (take a look everybody)

They call this open mic but i'm closin the shop
cause they say that I'm the future, i'm just waiting to drop
My game is like the Bulls back in ninety six
I'm untouched you like a Timex always takin the licks
I moved into the game, the same day i'm runnin it
If your flow seems kinda week it's cause Jae is gunnin it
I ain't the greatest but i'll whoop you on a freestyle
And if you take it to the streets, I'll Steven Seagal
All i need is 10 bars to impress the crowd
I'm influential, make the library kids get loud
If the Feds wanna catch me, they gotta serach for it
My style is like the FBI with search warrants
You could come to my hood, that don't mean your leavin
You get left with oxygen tanks to help your breathin
When i grab the mic, I spike with fatal blows
Make blood rush through your veins, cause a broken nose
I've broken bones, just by doing this rap thing
You think I do my thing here, you should here this cat sing
It's Evolution...85-03
One more year i be 106, VH1 and MTV
I got status that'll label me an MD
When i'm done rappin, leave the dictionary empty

Not bad, it's my first one, tell me what you all think...honestly!