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How I Feel
From Dawn To Dusk,i'm on tha grind paper
Chasing,
Concentrating, on nothing but this money i'm
Making.
No time for Haters Hating ,
so don't get me mistaken
You Can Hate Me Or Hate Me Not,Either way,
I'm still top Notch,
And i'm headed straight for tha top.
When i was Down So Many Mother fuckErs Kicked Me,
Now they coming around frontin all Friendly.
Trying To To Decieve me, But Believe Me,
I can spot out a snake so easy
THey say Misery Love Company,But i 'm getting Money,
so no time fa jealousy
I'm trying to strectch my money and watch it grow,
so these haters, can hate me even mo'
cause life is what you make it to be,
So please don'waist ya life hating on me
be right back with my links
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the structure could have been better organized out real deal, the topic was good, would have made more sense and woulda been more interestin if you had more feeling to it. it was basic and your rhymes and flow need improvementt, so try to work on a better flow and more actions to your drops
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Nice flow, needs structure, try using something like 1,1,2,2 or 1,2,1,2,for example...dog,cat,hog,sat, it was good and the topic was alright...ill be checkin mo from u
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I hated the topic, mainstream is very shitty quality and the "making money" topic is like a 50 cent topic that ruins the image of an emcee. Good flow, I couldn't really see where this is going though. Basic rhyme scheme. Try adding similes, metaphors 'n personification. The work really well.
Newayz, keep droppin'
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ok ma no disrespect..........you came played...tru story. ive done om's like this but had a deeper feeling even wen comin at hatas. you definitely need to elevate. n all areas.
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Elevate man......hot song though I bet if ya done it ova a beat it'd sound hot as fuck.......juss elevate on flow, multies, and metaphorical punches......you'll be str8
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You brought this piece back from 7 months ago
lol
